Ahahahaha! I loved it!!

what i would give to be in her spot!

yeh im still a kurama and botan fan but if you write a chapter two can you add a little kurama and botan just to make it extra appealing for us kb and hb fans ya know a two in one story thankyou

I LOVE IT i already know whats gonna happen but i still read this everytime i come to this site you did a good job i know this was a one time thing but can you make a chapter two of what happened afetrword pretty plz p.s before i read this story i was a kurama and botut fan fan but now i am a hiei + botan fan your a great stor writer i`ll recomend this story to my fan GOOD LUCK

WSZHAHAAHAHAHHAHA! lol.

Are you familiar with the manga Meru Puri? A scene very much like that occured in volume three (I'm NOT accusing you of plagurism)...it is not a well-known series, so it would be pretty neat to find someone else who read it too!

Even if you don't read that manga, brilliant story!

nice but what was his illness?

It was quite short but really cute and nice! Keep up the good work!Ja ne!#)^_^

That sounds so much like Hiei. Nice job! I enjoyed reading it.

"she could hear the fire demon’s distinctive laughter ringing in her ear" that last bit just made the story. This is a hilarious fic.

Heyy Heyy

Aw! This story was so kawaii! ^.^;; Nice job!

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