I hope you update soon,

This story looks like it will surpass the first in greatness.

this looks good as well

Wow. Sounds interesting.

Ash making a clone of MISTY to be a DAUGHTER though... sounds like that could be incest, bleh. Or is she not EXACTLY like Misty, just sort of like... Misty's daughter would be?

Also... Ash goes crazy enough to want to clone Misty and then as soon as he meets Marie he's perfectly fine and ends up with a perfect family? Hmm... you might want to make that a little more realistic.

Besides that it's very intriguing!

Keep it up!

-Lizzie