WHAT HAPPENED TO THE END?!
what's going on?

someone recommended this story, so i went right ahead and read your story non-stop and finish all chapters you had made by far. this fic of yours is amazing and i LOVE it! i was about to add ur story to my story alert when i realise, "what, this story had'nt been updated for almost a year awready??!" D;

well, all the best.

i hope that you'll still continue this. it's really nice. ^^

aw i rly like da fic i hope itll be updated soon ^^ those kisses were sweet (da barf one funny too) lol those two r so lively hehe i think i kno wats da gift but im still unsure. cant wait to see wat da nex chp brings :]

Update soon? At least I hope you do. I like your writing, going to try to learn from it. O.O

i'm waiting for more!
love every moment of shiznat and how easily shizuru could trick our dear natsuki and *cough* manipulated people...e.g: Nao. :D

This story is so bittersweet. I want to keep reading and look forward to your updates, but at the same time, I'm afraid that the more updates you do, the closer you are to giving us the last chapter (which I'm guessing is going to be a tragic one) It's even worse that you pretty much tell us how many chapters are left through your Calendar theme. (Please don't think that I don't want you to update! I do! After all, you can't leave us hanging like this. Us readers want more ShizNat moments before the end)

As for your method of juggling the chronology, I like/hate it. When reading through the story, I found myself wanting to read the chapters in their correct timeline. If I wasn't lazy, I would have copied and pasted the chapters and put them in the correct order. At the same time, I do find myself appreciating the fact that you've given us the later parts of the story. They pretty much act like cushions for the inevitably crushing conclusion.

I suppose it's also a way for you to force us to read the chapters more than once(which I didn't mind, as they are well-written). I was basically hitting the back and forward button on my browser after reading a chapter so I could see what happened before and after. It's a bit like reading those "choose your own ending" books.

So yea...I'm looking forward to your updates. The chapters are really written well. Lots of emotions packed in tiny packages. But please don't let that discourage you from writing longer chapters. :-)

I've read it up there and I think it's good. It's chilling. I think I know how it will end and I don't like it, but somewhat I'm looking forward for the end. As much I love Shizuru and Natsuki, I don't want to see them be apart. at 29th day I decidet to stop reading but I cannot help myself and I had to continue. I can't say I'm lookin forward for next update but I can say I'm really curious what it will be about.

you have to continue this. and soon. i love this so much. and i'm so curious about what's in the box. why do i get a weird feeling it's not something good? please update soon. ^^

woot!

i didnt know my pm was that encouraging. im just glad you picked up where you left off. lol. talk about desperate measures to get shizuru to talk. i wonder whats in the present? a picture/letter/clothes? mm... oh right, i looked at the last time i reviewed your story and its been a year since my last review. huh. anyways, thanks for updating your fic. i believe it was worth the wait. ^^

renny-chan

Well, lookie lookie, an update! My heart sings! Though my brain aches - what is going on with Shizuru!? Something unhappy, to be sure, but I dare not speculate for fear of being overly-optimistic and bawling afterward, or being too pessimistic and spending my days brooding while I wait for this to be completed. Neutrality, I shall maintain neutrality, though it proves difficult when I am so desperately curious... Do not let this update flounder on its own! Send friends!

I re-read this once again, and things fell into place. Third time's the charm? It took a few cycles, but I'm finally beginning to see the order, and it's unfortunate but I enjoy it, so that- is good. (coherency?)
So the day after Shizuru and Natsuki made a promise she found out Shizuru was dying- then the day after the shower scene with the foreshadowing Shizuru was in the emergency room- so quickly, so- and what did she have to forgive Natsuki for? There are 17 chapters left, 18 if the month has 31 days (unless you're planning on skipping a few), and it's the between moments I love so much, even if they hurt. Because they're happy and sad and so good I want to cry. ^^' But mostly I'm just happy you updated, so I say: three cheers for renny! (now if she'd just update her own work, mm?) *waves flag* Fight-o, O author! The halfway point is near, and it's still as good as ever.
~Naolin

an update! ^^

ok...first when i started reading it i was like WTF!? WTH? but then little by little i started to get it xD is really a nice fic ^^ i really like it please dont take too long updating it ^^

Its so sad, is Shizuru going to die, plz dun let her die