oh this is so goood I love it great writig !

:) :D :p cool stuff! :) :D :p lalala! great story!

! I love this story! Will you make it Carby? PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE? Update soon!

:D

*Stephanie*

this is getting really good I hope you post more soon!

Oh my! What is this we've got going here? I dont know, i'm so confused, I only started reading it when Dave started to get involved. Let me see if I've got this straight...Tee is Dee and Dee is Tee? You coudln't have given them normal names like Dan and Matt could you? LOL. Anywho, when i saw that there was another chapter, i was so pleased! I actually went *gasp* yay! Yes i did. Anyway, Oh, my i hope you continue this soon, the suspense is freaking killing me i swear! Even in the beginning it was! Oh, please please please put up the next chapter faster than you put up this one! I need to know who was shot? Dave? Abby? Tee? Or Dee? Or whichever one? I can't remember...dude...you wouldn't either if you were me. The dog and I were up till four am, and the dog is very tired, she's not used to staying up that late...

hey your still leaving me in suspence let me know when the next chapter is up please.

ohhhhhhh please hurry with the next chapter!

OMG! These shootings in schools are really horrible in real life! Poor kids and parents! But I like this story, please post the next part soon and I hope Dave's alright, just don't kill him!

Oh, my! Too bad I only started reading this when Dave got involved...so I'm confused (kind of). But this is so great! Oh, my! Don't kill my little Dave, all the Dave-lovers will form a plot to slash you! But I love this story, I hope you continue it soon! Oh, I'm insane! Thanks

::gasps:: Nooooo! I don't want Claire to die! I swear if you don't put up the next chapter soon I'll . . . I'll . . . I'll do something horrible when I think of it! Ha!

Whoa! That was deep! Let Claire live! Let Carter live! Let it be Carby! Please? ;) Write more soon!

Very Good, enjoyable, kept me interested throughout. Thanks for the good read.

that was so cold to leave it there. I guess I just have to wait :)

so you are just going to leave it there come on finish please

I REALLY like this one! Write more soon! Could u pretty please make it Carby? Pretty pretty please?