Wow..really thoughtful and pensive action here. Nice work.

We have lost our Pope. You may know him, his name is Roxas. If you have seen him, please let one of us know. Thank you for your time.

On another note, if you have seen Baldsem by any chance, let me know, but you do not have to tell anyone else. ;O

Rapeclone.

So lovely. You've captured them very well, despite what you say. I like your writing style a lot. Keep it up!

I love it! The habit seems very much like Roxas, and the devotion is very much an Axel thing to do. Wow, wonderfully written and I have no clue how to improve it. Wonderful!

I rather liked this short story. Very interesting theory of their past together.

omg.
I don't know what to say except for: Wow.
I loved how you wrote Axel who kinda doesn't realize he's in love with Roxas. But, if that's not how it's supposed to be read, then, uh, ignore my fangirl-ness. I also like Roxas' stubborness. He is the cutest. I realy hope this is a chaptered fic. You'd do great. Seriously.

Awh, that was short, but sweet ^^ Well written, nice job

I like this, good writing on your part.

"... the barest whisper of his name..."

That was good. ^_^