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tmatosup1422
2008-11-01 . chapter 1
love the story! please write some more! i'm a sucker for lily/james stories...

anyway, try mulan, its got good songs like reflection, honor to us all, ill make a man out of you, and a girl worth fighting for. disney movies rock!
ElvendorkLuVer
2008-08-18 . chapter 1
I SIMPLY LOVE IT!
Winni3
2007-07-05 . chapter 1
Aw, yet another awesomely fluffly story XD
jenna bo benna
2007-06-07 . chapter 1
hm... good one! i like pretty much all of ur stories... hehe some diney's for ya..(i LOVE disney... i already made 5 cds lol)
anyways im sory if some of these dont have songs in them...
1.hunchback of notre dame
mysteriousmayhemmaker
2007-05-12 . chapter 1
normally i almmost never read one shots, but i really like yours. they are intense, but light a the same time. i think you are a phenominal writer.
P.P.V.V
2007-05-08 . chapter 1
YAPP! Summer vacation is the greatest feeling in the world: the feeling of being FREE.

Thanks for another wonderful story. I like the fact that even though you don't write multi-chaptered fics, you have many cute one-shots that just feed my L/J-deprived soul. :P

It kinda makes up for it!

plus, I love the way you write, but I think you already know that. You're gonna be sick of hearing from me ^.^

Thanks for writing,,
-P.P.V.V.
-cookiesncreme1511-
2007-03-27 . chapter 1
Aw. So very adorable! I love it! =]
summersgirl2526
2007-03-05 . chapter 1
aw
Yorke0593
2007-02-07 . chapter 1
It was so... cheesy. But great. You really are an excellent writer, but you don't need to hear that from a lowly grovellor like myself. If you're looking for a disney song I would look in Mulan or Aladin!
vivphy05
2006-12-03 . chapter 1
I REALLY wish that you'd do another one of these stories! I absolutely love them, and they never get old!! Please?!?
teenprocrastinator
2006-12-01 . chapter 1
awesome!! that was nice
Ohio_Sucks
2006-11-20 . chapter 1
Hey I love this story. I've read it so many times but i haven't reviewed it yet(because i never review stories, i know, bad me). I really never review. But i got an e-mail from my friend and i really thought you could use it for a one-shot.

A WOMAN SHOULD HAVE...

A set of screwdrivers,
a cordless drill, and
A black lace bra.

A WOMAN SHOULD HAVE...
One friend who
Always makes her Laugh...
And one
Who lets her cry...

A WOMAN SHOULD HAVE...
A good piece of furniture
not previously owned
by
Anyone else in her family...


A WOMAN SHOULD HAVE

Eight matching plates,
Wine glasses with stems,
And a recipe for a meal that will
Make her guests feel honored.

A WOMAN SHOULD HAVE...
A feeling of control over
Her destiny...

EVERY WOMAN SHOULD KNOW...
How to fall in love
Without losing herself...

EVERY WOMAN SHOULD KNOW...
HOW TO QUIT A JOB
BREAK UP WITH A LOVER
AND CONFRONT A FRIEND WITHOUT RUINING THE FRIENDSHIP...

EVERY WOMAN SHOULD KNOW...
When to try harder ... and
WHEN TO WALK AWAY.

EVERY WOMAN SHOULD KNOW...
That she can't change
The length of her calves,
The width of her hips, or
The nature of her
parents...


EVERY WOMAN SHOULD KNOW...
That her childhood
May not have been
Perfect..but;
Its over...

EVERY WOMAN SHOULD KNOW...
What she would and
Wouldn't
Do for love or more...

EVERY WOMAN SHOULD KNOW...
How to live alone...
even if
She doesn't like it.


EVERY WOMAN SHOULD KNOW...
Whom she can trust,
Whom she can't,
And why she shouldn't
Take it personally.


EVERY WOMAN SHOULD KNOW...
Where to go...
Be it to her best friend's kitchen table.
Or a charming inn in the woods...
When her soul needs soothing...

EVERY WOMAN SHOULD KNOW...

What she can and can't accomplish
In a day...
A month.
And a
year...

I was reading it and immediately one of your one-shots popped up in my head. I don't know if you want to use it, but i can see you writing about it.
siriusforeva
2006-10-27 . chapter 1
Awee! That was such a cute story! I loved it!
elisabetha-ex. spuffyluver-
2006-10-07 . chapter 1
Try Anastacia and Aladdin, they're good=) I adore this story its so cute!! I want James! And Sirius! And maybe even Remus come to think of it=)
Brit
2006-08-08 . chapter 1
I think the way you portrayed their relationship is a bit too sugary...Lily, from the descriptions in the books, doesn't sound so...so...ah, hell, I'll just come out and say it...so much like friggin' Jane Bennett (not that "Pride and Prejudice" is horrible...it's one of the few [ok, 15] books I'm taking with me to school in a couple of weeks).

Lily is a red-head and, take it from a girl whose red-hair goes back AT least four generations, we have tempers. She wouldn't get all simpery for him.

Otherwise it was good. Good storyline, just, like I said, not Lily.
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