The second chapter was really cute and sweet, but I actually think this could have been a stronger piece with the first chapter standing alone.

Hehe so cute and so in character. Well done.

nice!! good job!

That was totally -awesome- =D I loved your first chapter especially. Everything about it was wonderful, truly wonderful. Great job =D
-Gabunny

:D That was great! I

aw! luved it! so cute!

*does the 10th comment dance*
You. Are. NEVER. Online. Anyway, let me review and then argue with you later.
Aside from some formatting problems - a broken line here and there, underlining continued at the beginning of Chapter Two and you insisting on spelling "the" as "teh" and putting self-depreciating instead of self-deprecating - I liked it. I have never seen a single episode of House, but now I desperately want to. See what you did?!
Now, I'm assuming you're going to explain your lack of communication. :P I'll be expecting a lengthy diatribe in my inbox by Wednesday for the latest.
Good to see some stuff by you again, Ink. It's not CI, but it's good nonetheless.
Ciao!
Ash.

great great great. an excellent first fic.
i loved cam's reaction to House losing his balance/
the ending was perfect
thanks for posting

very nice. i like it.

House better not be playing with her. Great start!

I am really enjoying this story so far... your portrayal of Cameron has me intrigued. A lot of people only see the Cameron on the surface, and do not think to delve any deeper, but you have. Please keep going- I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

It's really really good so far. Update soon or I'll beat you with a garden nome

This was really good, and believeable.
It's very in-character, House leaving a note
instead of telling her in person.
-Waiting for the next update.

Lied about liking her? Okay, I'll buy that. You know that's as far as it goes for me, though. This was good anyway.

this is good, i like it so far.
poor cam, i hope house isnt toying with her...its great when he actually means it (wink wink)
so...next chappie soon? i hope so!
seeya