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| Fremma 2008-10-07 ch 6,  | abuseI know it happened with Marco and Duluth, and they're a special case really, but I didn't think there was anything about Weyrlings getting lost between in quite these sorts of numbers. I would have thought it was really very unusual to lose a Weyrling this way. |
| GinnyStar 2008-07-03 ch 9, | abuseI hope you write more about your female green rider and her expernces during the Pass. Great Story. |
| GinnyStar 2008-07-03 ch 8, | abuseWell, what a way to enter a Pass. Nice action. Along with how the fighting wings fight. The Wyerling transport and toss the bags of firestone. I thougt that they just let go of the spend ones, I guess that its too windy to do that. Good Story :) |
| GinnyStar 2008-07-03 ch 7, | abuseWell, you did let your reader know. What came via the dragonsrider was great! :) I am sory about the english/spelling problems. I have problems with both. It sometime harder for me tp type up the words I'm feeling, than just say them. Great Story!. |
| GinnyStar 2008-07-03 ch 6, | abuseWell I feel for the Wyrling dragon/riders sad :( Also that brown rider loosing his twin I can understand that too. But if they the dragon/rider pair did not give the proper image or check with the Wyerlingmaster and dragon, then I that I can understand that too. Good story. :) |
| GinnyStar 2008-07-03 ch 5, | abuseNice story, how they are group together talking about what they could be after wyerlinghood. First flight, was very good. Nice how they grouped the dragons via color and did First Flight. :) |
| GinnyStar 2008-07-03 ch 4, | abuseGreat story! Nice how that new rider from Fort help out the new female green-rider. Not quite in the same way as in Dragonseye/Red Star Rising, but with your own tiwst to it. Great story line I hope you will write more stories like this one. |
| GinnyStar 2008-07-03 ch 3, | abuseWill nice story so far. With the Wyerwoman suport of the new dragon pair. Hopeful they can take the traning as wyerling and more! :) |
| GinnyStar 2008-07-03 ch 2, | abuseWell in that time that was the way it was. If you have read some of the early books green dragonets would impress both girls and boys. But that changed over the turn. Good Story :) |
| GinnyStar 2008-07-03 ch 1, | abuseGood Start to your story. I well read more later. Its time to eat here. I enjoy reading about Pern and Anne and Todd McCaffrey works also the work she had written with others too. |
| D. M. Robb 2007-09-29 ch 9, | abuseAre you sure you're not Anne McCaffrey?:-) Your details and characterizations were excellent. You really captured the hardship and angst of being a dragonrider, beyond the glory of Impression. I'm looking forward to your next Pern fic! |
| Miss Interpreted 2007-08-13 ch 9, | abuseAW! YAY, K'say is so awesome... i am thinking of writing a Pern story... my main character's name is G'lan, im not sure if she should be a brown rider, or ride a queen... ill figure it out soon enough, ne ways, that was a good story. You should think about writing a sequel... |
| Lessa 2007-06-12 ch 9, anon. | abuseOMG I've loved this perticular Anne work forever and you did a very good job of a Fanfic with all your own orignal characters. I would love to see What happens to Carima in the future. And it is a really great story. |
| aBs 2007-05-19 ch 9, anon. | abuseHello just wanted to say that I loved your story, loved the dragons and characters:-) So glad that there was a happy ending! I look forward to more stories from Pern. many thanks;.) |
| twinklewind 2007-05-15 ch 8, | abuseforgot to say, i love mayath!! shes so much more developed than any dragon in the books, and all the more fun! |