aw how sweet, it makes me want to cry. i love it when storys have the thing when natsume says mikans name and she freezes or blushes or what ever, so cute. too bad natsume dies tho its so sad:(

I'm one of Natsume fan XD.I loved this story that was sad but very wonderful you are very good I very liked this part"he was lying there with the most peacelul look on is face

And he was smiling"
Congrulation your fanfic is one of my favourites XD Do more fanfics

P.S sorry for the grammar mistake I speak french

Nice!

I feel really sad right now cause you made Natsume die but I won't kill ya since I know it's true that he might died T.T but still I love the story ^^

wah, im a natsume fan, and u killed him! well, its okay... i like your plot, story...everything, really...

WAWAWAWA! You're mean...
I'm crying right now...
God! I can't stop crying...
Now, everyone knows I'm a crybaby...
You're just totally mean...
But I really love it...
Thanks for writing. I'll definitely read more of your fanfics.

Why did you kill my Natsume?

*yay*
*shiff**sniff*

** YOU! U RUINED MY NIGHT THAT STORY SUCKED! I LUV NATSUME! *CRIES*

you stupid person you are not worthy of writing fics.you are mad

It was after a few weeks later when everyone received the news of Natsume’s death. It was shocking to most students. They never knew of his situation and immediately understood when the reason was broadcasted throughout the school. Everyone regretted the way they treated him and went to his funeral. But whenever someone looked at the casket, they fail to see the resemblance of the Natsume they knew for he was lying there with the most peaceful look in his face and…

He was smiling.

--> This has got to be one of the best paragraphs in this fic! The ellipsis adds to the effect, and the impact is a good one all-in-all. Four thumbs up! :)

That's so good! I almost cried!! Although people have hardley seen me cry unless i was way irritated or depressed. I also cry at tragic movies and books.

AArggh! OMG! I can't believe it! You KILLED Natsume!

It was sad, it was chessy but it was so so sad in the end, even for a 'cliche' ending - it was just to sad. i nearly felt like crying when he said he was going to die and she realised it was the last time they'd see each other! wah! that was sad, it was so sad also when - the funeral - was sad. aw... i cant believe, Natsume - you killed him here! argahrhfhghdihfig! nah... dont worry - for the most part i half think he will anyways - using his alice like that (i mean in the official GA story) - but - there might be hope although its not revealed yet. (awaiting further more translations of the manga)

i found the part where sakura describes her feeling when she and natsume began to spend time together - in silence at first and then little by little they start talking - i thought it was really peaceful - one cant help wish they had such a place and such a company - not demanding more of each other - just peaceful and content in each other's company...

aw... this just makes this story even more sad! grgaguirguhuehugewfgueigf!

owell - apart from my displeasure (ah geez.. look at how im sounding!) at killing Natsume off - this story is quite good, it carried me along and made me feel really really sad.

sorry but i dont like sad endings like this one (yes, im a very narrow minded person)..grammar and plot was good though so keep it up..
just saying that im dissappointed for killing off natsume..and making mikan chan sad~~* mou!!

aw i cried

So sad!! *sobs* and...and...Natsume was smiling! WAH! *cries harder*

eherm... *wiping tears* the story was very nicely done. Every aspect of the story was great, although I feel bad for Ruka...

And yeah, Natsume DOES have that kind of alice. I was actually wondering (ever since I knew about it) about what Mikan and the others would do when Natsume finally drains his life from so much using his alice. And I always wondered why Natsume was never bothered and why he kept on using it for no reason than to threaten people. Oh well, guess his life is not that wonderful to bother losing it.

Keep on making great stories!!