this should be tragedy. i think?
he died? ahhhhhhh.

why...does it have to be sad.

Crying
so sad poor Natsume -kun

beautiful!11 even if i don't know what chaste means...

WAHHHHHHHHHHHHH. DDD8

SO SAD. DDDDD8

But very well written. A few spelling mistakes, but that's okay.

...WAHHHH NATSUMEEE. D8

aw how sweet, it makes me want to cry. i love it when storys have the thing when natsume says mikans name and she freezes or blushes or what ever, so cute. too bad natsume dies tho its so sad:(

I'm one of Natsume fan XD.I loved this story that was sad but very wonderful you are very good I very liked this part"he was lying there with the most peacelul look on is face

And he was smiling"

Congrulation your fanfic is one of my favourites XD Do more fanfics

P.S sorry for the grammar mistake I speak french

Nice!

I feel really sad right now cause you made Natsume die but I won't kill ya since I know it's true that he might died T.T but still I love the story

wah, im a natsume fan, and u killed him! well, its okay... i like your plot, story...everything, really...

WAWAWAWA! You're mean...

I'm crying right now...

God! I can't stop crying...

Now, everyone knows I'm a crybaby...

You're just totally mean...

But I really love it...

Thanks for writing. I'll definitely read more of your fanfics.

Why did you kill my Natsume?

*yay*

*shiff**sniff*

FUCK YOU! U RUINED MY NIGHT THAT STORY SUCKED! I LUV NATSUME! *CRIES*

you stupid person you are not worthy of writing are mad

It was after a few weeks later when everyone received the news of Natsume’s death. It was shocking to most students. They never knew of his situation and immediately understood when the reason was broadcasted throughout the school. Everyone regretted the way they treated him and went to his funeral. But whenever someone looked at the casket, they fail to see the resemblance of the Natsume they knew for he was lying there with the most peaceful look in his face and…

He was smiling.

- This has got to be one of the best paragraphs in this fic! The ellipsis adds to the effect, and the impact is a good one all-in-all. Four thumbs up! :)