love the story but thats a little too ooc for hermione about telling her dad he tried to rape her

Ohh, a shopping spree, while i once dreaded them now i welcome them like an old friend ;-)
Ciao.

Excellent story. Great job. :)

My poor excuse for a memory finally came up with a thought. :)
IF I am right, this is only the 2nd story I have found where Harry refused to take part in the tournament. And I have been reading fanfic stories for about 3 years now. In the other one, Harry refused & Snape lost his magic! ROFL :)
Ah! Another thought! All they had to do was shoot Voldeshorts in the head 7 times. Once every time he came back. Wonder why that never occurred to anyone?

JimS

I read a story once where Sirius & Harry found the Riddle graveyard before the ritual. They replaced all the Riddle bones with rabbit bones! ROFL :) Voldysnort came back as a 6 foot bunny!

JimS

WHY would anyone mind if Harry is kept out of the tournament? He was under the age limit. Rowling should never have put him into it to start with. Course, she proved she is not the "great" author everyone seems to think she is. She got way to many things wrong. GRIFFINdore's symbol is a lion and NOT a Griffin?! Huh? I am a stroke survivor with no memory & I am smarter than that. She killed one of the twins. Why not kill Percy if one of the family HAD to die. Then she killed both of Teddy's parents. Was she trying to make a 'Harry Jr'? And the last book or two should not be read by anyone under 12 years old.
I am not saying Rowling is a bad author. She is just not as good as people seem to think.
And no, I cannot write squat myself. Another thing I lost. :(. I have to proofread these comments! :). ROFL

JimS

Any belt below the black belt is NOT that important. They can be different from dojo to dojo. In my youth, I trained in Kenpo while I was in Hawaii. I was in a special dojo set up for military members. We used a different ranking system than the main dojo where our instructor was from. We learned the same style though.
Way back then there were only 2 dojo's outside Hawaii that taught Kenpo. Today it is taught world wide, including England & Canada. I have online friend in Canada & was surprised when I found out they studied Kenpo! Kenpo is a combination of several types of martial arts. You learn a lot of different things. It is also a very deadly art. I was taught not only to kill, but when to kill. Some 40 years lator, I have used my training only 4 times. I arrested 3 drunks while on Shore Patrol in the Navy & about 4 years ago I manage to keep from breaking my neck when I fell out of the bathtub. That was a minor miracle as I am a stroke survivor who lost all of his memory & training. BUT, my body remembered & reacted to the fall to save my life.
Sadly, at this point, I can't even remember the order of the belt colors between white & black. And as we did not use them, I never learned the half belts.
I hope this is helpful. ;)

JimS

The ending was a bit too pat, you should have kept going - at least 'til NEWTs! I was LMAO at the Christmas poem though! :-P

Poor Crouch! :-( I don't really think anyone deserves the Dementor's Kiss - if you want to execute someone, use the Death Curse - it's more merciful!

OH MAN, THAT. IS. E.V.I.L! :-P Good riddance to Sinvellus!

Loved it! Great story. I enjoyed how you had the characters actually use logic to solve their problems.

Yeah, I totally agree with Fyreheart.

Well, it was kind of stupid not to inform Dumbledore od the comming attack...
Still, great story!

Good story, thanks for sharing.

Hermione is going to lie to her father and tell him that Harry tried to rape her if he pops up unexpectedly in the location to which SHE keyed the portkey? That is morally corrupt and a criminal action. And this just after she agreed to be his girlfriend? She just showed herself to be a lying sociopath.

I'm sorry, but I just can't continue to read a story with such a morally corrupt main character.