Reviews for OYL The Flash
Kyer 10/31/09 . chapter 6
Yeah, this is obviously been placed somewhere else where there are lots of tie-ins. Mass confusion abounds, no doubt. I'm going to need a map, aren't I?
Kyer 10/31/09 . chapter 7
Oh damn-that's right!

If Rival had taken over Max and entered the SF, then how was it Max was himself (from the scans I saw) in Rebirth? What happened to Rival? Argh. I am so out of the loop between the...eh...damn...one of those Crisis things and Rebirth.
Kyer 10/31/09 . chapter 8
Dear old Disastrous Crises comic book company and its penchant for major Angstfests. *sniffles* Bless'em.

Oh. That explains SuperDuperman's newest power.

I really like the way you wrote Fox's commentary. Reminds me of Waid.
Kyer 10/31/09 . chapter 9
John, you were always in trouble. Get used to it, boyo.

Jay Garrick! I hope your *wife* never hears you say that about women!

Savitar was a fairly interesting villain. More so to me than Cicada was. A pity they gave him such a ho-hum death in Rebirth. Though...might come back as a Black Lantern if those rings can reach into either of the Speed Forces.
Kyer 10/31/09 . chapter 10
Yes, I'm one of those crazy bastards who have to read the last part of a story first.

Hey-John Fox! Don't see him in action very often. A pity as I always rather liked the guy even if he did make one major mistake and nearly got his ass handed to him on a platter for it.

And Jay! God, I love Jay.

WALLY! Wait...Wally's a god? Oh dear...tell the other DC gods to duck for cover and batten down the heavenly support beams. Ack...and his kids are alive. Rats. (Sorry, Wally, adore you to pieces and Linda is one fine warrior lady, but those kids are a pain.)

Man, I wish I was near a place that sold comics...well, other than Batman, Superman, and Wonder Woman ones. *sigh*

Nice job...although I had to wonder what Barry thought of Wally taking over the Speed Force. Assuming Barry was still sentient somewhere? The godhood thing makes me a bit leery as I have the awful suspicion that this is where a certain head writer in DC wants to take Allen. urgh.
kobez2.0 10/24/09 . chapter 10
Right on, man, good work. I'm glad to see you updating after so long, I was beginning to think you had abandoned the fic. Also, it's too bad you seem to be letting someone else take over writing Flash but I hope you will continue to writ other characters. Your stories are always well thought out and interesting to read.

Peace,

-Kobez-
ThunderRiver411 1/13/09 . chapter 8
This is a pretty good story so far. I'm working on a story to with a small twist to it. It's a Pokemon story, but there is something hidden. Think you can spot it?

Continue soon. This is looking good.
kobez2.0 6/5/08 . chapter 8
I hate cliff hangers, but I'll forgive you because I like the story. also Whats going on over at DCI? it seems kinda like it's died or something.

keep up the good work.
kobez2.0 10/8/07 . chapter 7
exellent, Couldyou send me a link to the other site with the whole story? the last one diden't work.
kobez2.0 9/26/07 . chapter 6
absolutely amazing! I especially like the 'My name is John Fox' bits it reminds me of the "My namd is Wally West" things from when they revived the Flash comics. but i was sonering about the sudden jumps between chapters, some seem related, and others just kind of go off to what ever. KEEP WRITING!
2MindsMake1 11/30/06 . chapter 1
Oh SNAP! Damn good chapter! You did an incredible job with Wally. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Christine