great story

Interesting. I like it. Catch ya on the flip side.

Well, this has sure been a really long week, hasn't it?
Please update?

i hope you finish this! its a great story, and i can't wait to see where you're going with it. keep up the tremendous work! :)

O your so cruel! please please please finish this!

good story i like it

Ok, this is a very cool story but can i ask ya one favor... finish this! Ok, understand that ya have better things to do but it is very cruel to leave us hanging like this! No rush but do try to finish this.

Hmmm...I like this story a lot but I do feel it came to a very rushed and abrupt ending.