Very cute!

it was beautifully written! _

*sniff* So cute! I loved it! *can't explain it* I just love the way you made Tsuzuki slightly antisocial, and then Hisoka came to see him! I love that, when Hisoke just randomly goes to Tsuzuki's house for whtever reason... *happy* I wanna write something now!

Aw kawaii! Me likes this too. :D

It's like poetry. Poetry in prose. Your descriptive lines are absolutely beautiful, and the dialogue is so right-on it's scary. And when you're trying to be funny, I'm laughing out loud, and when it's sweet, I just want to melt. I loved the green and gold and sun focuses in this one.

that was GOOD! just like all your stories i have read so far!

Beautiful. This was one of the Tsusoka fics that I read and I'm already starting to get a good impression on the couple. Thanks for the effort! It was really well written, along with the playing of words and well versed conversations or whatever. Just to cap it all, good work. _ I'm really looking forward to seeing more fics of yours!

arigatou i really enjoyed this one _

... *blink*. WOW. I don't remember reading this before (stupid me /). But this is... wow. So nice.

Yummy fic, Shi Lin-san! A tad angsty, and all waff! Me like!

It's as they say, isn't it? "Happy people are hiding something." But I think this fic is really awesome; I like the way it shows Hisoka's importance to Tsuzuki without overstating.

Sigh... you know, I can't think of a THING that would make this better. Just can't. Well- maybe illustrations... I keep thinking of that little tiny drawing right at the end of the manga, volume 1; only in that case, it's Tsuzuki sitting crosslegged and reading (well, actually he's watching the birds, and the book's resting in his lap) and Hisoka is sound asleep leaning against his back. Nice corollary! I wonder, was that your inspiration? Beautiful work, if so or if not so. Thanks...

Sometimes it's hard to find a fic that matches your mood so perfectly. Awesome beyond words. Thank you.

-ICKA!

the IMP

fabulously written - i love your use of language, and the way you used the diff POVs

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Stunning. I've had moments like those where I wished they could just go on forever, and you captured that feeling perfectly with your story. The characterization was beautiful, as well as the imagry. I love you writing (and your webpagem I might add ). Keep up the good work. There are very few *english* Yami no Matsuei fan fiction writers.