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Reviews For: Crimson Corruption

Ruthaer
2007-09-07
ch 1,
abuseThis was really good!!I loved the Neji part. I hope you will write more.I would really like to read about Shikamaru.Thank you!
sugarhighnutjob
2006-12-17
ch 2,
abuseThe concept is wonderful and executed to a tee. I am in awe of your Hinata. The idea, the descriptions are wonderfully vivid but give room for the reader to step back and fill in the blanks for themselves with a morbid terror far worse than words could describe.

Wow. Just... wow.

Just a little nitpick:

"Later, Hinata wont remember much of that night."

"wont" should be "won't"
sugarhighnutjob
2006-12-17
ch 1,
abuseI love how you portrayed Neji in this. In particular, I enjoyed his vunerability and confusiong in not knowing what to do next as well as Neji's thoughts (however short) on Gai.
RyuuMahou
2006-05-29
ch 2,
abuseWouch Cruton. Painful, man!!
Travis Lock
2006-05-28
ch 2, anon.
abuselittle more like Naruto then even she knows eh? Don't touch the people she cares about or you are in a world of hurt.

They would have been Kumo-nin though, lightning is the country Clowd is the village in lightning.
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