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| Ruthaer 2007-09-07 ch 1, | abuseThis was really good!!I loved the Neji part. I hope you will write more.I would really like to read about Shikamaru.Thank you! |
| sugarhighnutjob 2006-12-17 ch 2, | abuseThe concept is wonderful and executed to a tee. I am in awe of your Hinata. The idea, the descriptions are wonderfully vivid but give room for the reader to step back and fill in the blanks for themselves with a morbid terror far worse than words could describe. Wow. Just... wow. Just a little nitpick: "Later, Hinata wont remember much of that night." "wont" should be "won't" |
| sugarhighnutjob 2006-12-17 ch 1, | abuseI love how you portrayed Neji in this. In particular, I enjoyed his vunerability and confusiong in not knowing what to do next as well as Neji's thoughts (however short) on Gai. |
| RyuuMahou 2006-05-29 ch 2, | abuseWouch Cruton. Painful, man!! |
| Travis Lock 2006-05-28 ch 2, anon. | abuselittle more like Naruto then even she knows eh? Don't touch the people she cares about or you are in a world of hurt. They would have been Kumo-nin though, lightning is the country Clowd is the village in lightning. |