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| DistractedlyHere 2006-07-20 ch 1,  | abuseI think its a good story, well written. But if she and Mac had relations 1 day after she was raped there is no way she would know who's baby it was. And isn't a little unrealtsic for a woman was was just raped to have sex with her boss for the first time? I'm just thinkin she's not in the mood for a while. Those two points I got stuck on. But its a really well-written, dramatci engaging story. |
| Star Girl11 2006-06-26 ch 15, | abuseOh my god that was so sad. I am right on the verge of crying (which is uncommon with me and stories). I really enjoyed this story. |
| Miss Metal -or- Zakia 2006-06-26 ch 15, | abuseWait just a sec, am I reading this right? Are BOTH Linds AND the baby dead? Just wanna know, cuz thats what this looks like, and I want to make sure. |
| MeredithandDerekfanforever 2006-06-26 ch 15, | abuseThat was so sad. I can't believe you killed off Lindsay. I hope to see more Mac/Lindsay stories from you very soon. Brandy |
| MeredithandDerekfanforever 2006-06-26 ch 14, | abuseOh no! I hope Ava is alright. Please post more soon. Brandy |
| chili-peppers 2006-06-26 ch 15, | abuseoh no!! that was so sad poor lindsey!and poor ava!i cant believe that happend! this story is so sad but its very good |
| MeredithandDerekfanforever 2006-06-26 ch 13, | abuseOh boy I wonder what is going to happen next. Please post more soon. Brandy |
| chili-peppers 2006-06-26 ch 14, | abuseOh no! i hope Ava is ok!! cant wait for more!! this rocks!! well done! |
| Miss Metal -or- Zakia 2006-06-25 ch 14, | abuseAW MAN! This is not good, not good at all! |
| NCISLOVER 2006-06-25 ch 13, | abuseoh you can't stop there. I need more chapters soon. please :) |
| Miss Metal -or- Zakia 2006-06-25 ch 12, | abuse*sigh* Oh, this is just WONDERFUL. Linds pregant with Louie, her rapist, and she told the 2 most important men in her life differently. This is just WONDERFUL. Great job Bluehaven4220, alot of suspence and action + correct spelling/grammer = A wonderful story. |
| MeredithandDerekfanforever 2006-06-25 ch 12, | abuseOh man! this story is heartbreaking. Please get Mac/Lindsay back together soon. Please post more soon. Brandy |
| Miss Metal -or- Zakia 2006-06-24 ch 11, | abuse? TOO LATE?!?!? What kind of a lame excuse is that, Linds? Your deeply in love with the guy and he suddenly walks away all you can say is TOO LATE?!?!?!? Your sad, very very sad. |
| chili-peppers 2006-06-24 ch 11, | abuseah!!that was so sad!! lol cant wait for more this is a great story!! |
| MeredithandDerekfanforever 2006-06-24 ch 11, | abuseOh no! It can't be too late. Please update soon. Brandy |