Okay, I just only finished ch. 1, but I had to stop and say that this is awesome! You are really good at this and it's so funny! I love Fez with the sombrero and handlebar mustache. lmao. And, of course, J and H. Love it! Okay, Im off to read more.

Love the story, it's so centered around J/H.

Hope you finish it, I would love to read the ending.

love it! Jackie and Hyde are meant to be together!

* firehottie *

This is fantastic! You have such a great grasp on the characters. And I love Red's comment about the car

"If you have any problems Jackie should know what to do"

I also love how you didn't forget about Red & Kitty even though everyone else was is in Florida. I love how you write them.

You're doing great, I can't wait for the next chapter.

love this story can't wait for the next chapter

This just gets better and better. Very funny chapter!

this is turly one of the best fanfics out their everyone is in charcter and you even know the history of the show can't wait for your next chapter

Aww yay, I really loved this chapter. The old men were hilarious and everyone is so in character! Can't wait to read about Jackie and Hyde's wedding, and I wonder what the "surprising outcomes" are going to be.

This is awesome! Everyone that is doing rewrites of the last season deserves a round of applause - they're so much better than what actually happened! I love this one - it's so in character, makes me laugh. I can't wait for more!

This fan-fic is awesome! You captured their personalities so well. You should have been a writer for T7S, maybe we could have all had our happy ending!

I am continuously blown away by this story. I'm not usually into the whole script format, but it works. I love how you are keeping Hyde in character, but still showing his softer side; your take on Mrs. Forman is priceless too! Keep up the good work, and I look forward to your next instalment!

great chapter. can't wait for the next one. update ASAP

You're doing such a great job of this story and you have an excellent grasp of the characters, can't wait for more :)

This is awesome, love it! You're doing great, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Great stuff! I can't wait for more. :-)