Writers block sucks, We know. We're fighting with some of it right now. Just take some time not thinking about it. This is a great story and the idea behind it is awesome. We're sure that you'll think of something. Until then take care of yourself and have fun! We'll be waiting for the next chapter no matter how long it takes.

writers block eh? oh that sucks i hate it when that happens. so don;t worry take your time with writing this story okay? Don't let people get to you either. Sometimes they can just be big losers with imagination. And you know what? I bet in some reality Daniel and Carter got together. it could so happen. Anyway good luck getting over writers block, i will loyally wait for the next chapter

hey take your time, there is nothing worse then rushed writing. And i was thinking that this story could use some more description, like, more on what they are doing or thoughts they are having about whats going on, dialogue is amazing though ^-^ really looking forward to whats going to happen next. XD and who the mysterious figure is.

Great Chapter, even though it was short. We can't wait for more!

Great chapter. We can't wait for more

Better much better, im looking forward to the next chapter. update soon!

Hey,

First off, i'd just like to say that i thought your story idea was really, really great. seriously, i dont think anyone has done one like that before, it was really good.

The only thing that could be maybe improved a bit, would be the character names.. "d.j, t.j.. d..j?."etc. I just found it a bit confusing thats all.. i forgot which character was who, and whos kids they were..lol, i think if you used their real name and surname, it would be a little less confusing.

But, other than that, great job, i really liked it :) can you write more?

oh god, Sam married to Daniel and having his kids? I'm gonna be sick!

That was good. We're really curious on why JD passed out. If Anubis had something to do with it We're betting on it getting very interesting. We can't wait for more!

okay i like your idea, in fact i think its brilliant, but you need to break up the sentences. like when someone new begins to speak start a new paragraph. see sometimes its hard to follow. but im looking for more ^^

Hey this is great so far!! It's kinda hard to keep all the kids seperate but that might have something to do with the fact that we're really tired. Anyway we can't wait for more so keep up the good work!

This is good! I would like to know what happens!
Looking forward to more!