That was really good.

Keep up the good work!

!(-KinkyK)

...Smart. Interesting...and hot, yeah. :D I seem to be unable to squeeze out a better review right now, so I'll just leave it at "I liked it".

I was just thinking exactly the same situation between these two... so cute T_T

Ah morixHunny
i love that pairing ^_^ the story was sweet and sexy...but not sickly sexy... it was perfect!
my only problem is that it is a little short, i bet you could make a great (and long) fan fic with this!
over all i loved the story!

Naw...so goddamn beutiful!! Love Mori-senpai!! Iam really a fan to Ouran high school host club ( who isnt? ) so thanxs for writing this

Breathtaking and heartaching. I loved it.

I hope you write more Mori/Hunny, it's beautiful ^_^

And I thought he was tired. XD

Yay for HunnyxMori! Good job! Keep it up...just not hot enough! More, more, more!

I loved it :0!
and im glad I found this cause its so hard for me to find mori/honey fics =3=!

and the person that said about them being cousins...
D: shush.your.mouth.

Oh,not enough smut. :( I hope that perhaps you may writ some smuttier fics. But, oh well.

A Fact that may not be true: I've believe that somewhere I read before said that the mangaka herself claimed Takashi and Mitsukuni were her current yaoi couple. As well as it maybe true, I'm still unsure.

vampire911: (If you're reading this) Hikaru and Kaoru are not **-s. Instead as Haruhi explained, they were pretending and were never serious with each other. They only put up the act but because they are twins after all, their brotherly love is there of course. Hikaru never wants to see his Kaoru hurt and vice-versa. Ultra sibling love are an okay but not in the sense of being a ** and incestious. While Hikaru is has fallen for Haruhi the only '**' ->might.>

As to review the story: I have to agree there's OCC-ness here. :( But I like the plot. Sweet and bitter. Just the type of 'chocolate' I would prefer in a -bittersweet- fic. But character wise, with both of them alone together and there really is a yaoi relationship between them, the first thing I'll think they'll do is talk affectionately with Honey the 'damnsel in distress' and Mori 'shining knight armor'. It seems to me they would silently open up. After all, Honey is a secretive person while Mori the quiet one. :D Keep up the good work!

THis was sweet, and touched a lot more on Hunny's true self when he's around Mori. It was really quite cute.

I think you did a very nice job with this. I like seeing the insecure side of Mori. while watching the series and reading the manga I got the impression that Mori would probably be a bit more talkative when it was just him and Honey. And I like that you showed Honey kind of act his age, and that you showed that he might be a little sensitive about his looks. I think alot of people forget that as hosts, a lot of the personality quirks the characters show in series are just an act. Honey acts like a child because he looks like one and that brings more clients, that dosen't mean he really thinks like a child or that he acts like one all the time. And Mori is quiet and stoic because thats his role, he very well may be a bit more talkative when he's with Honey. Anyway, enough of my rambling, the point is I think you did a great job of showing what their real personalities might be like behind the scenes, when no one is looking. Nice work. I love it.

Yes! Finally! No one has written a fic about Honey and Mori. I was getting worried no one else liked that pairing.lol. Good job on this fic.

OK it has a good plot to it and a good story line but i do worse than stroking ego's...ok if you dont like critzisim then do not continue reading...

1) Mori and Hunny are cousins. WTF is that i am OK with incest but host club already has a pair of **'s thats why the twins are there.

and most importantly:

2) HOW COULD YOU! what was up with Mori being so insecure? he may feel very devoted but really you made mori talk to much way to much talking. it took the whole feeling out of it.

but it was very good even though very out of character.