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| Zacc 2006-07-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe story was great even though I didn't like how you took the lazy mans way out on the death on Naruto. It could have you a little more action and description. Overall I like the story, but thank God you dont write the manga version becasue this would be a horrible way for my favorite charactor to DIE!! Keep up the good work. |
| dashdashhypenspace- 2006-06-17 ch 1,  | abusegood work, keep it up. |