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Zacc
2006-07-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseThe story was great even though I didn't like how you took the lazy mans way out on the death on Naruto. It could have you a little more action and description. Overall I like the story, but thank God you dont write the manga version becasue this would be a horrible way for my favorite charactor to DIE!!
Keep up the good work.
dashdashhypenspace-
2006-06-17
ch 1,
abusegood work, keep it up.
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