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Reviews for: First Time
starfish saver
2007-03-11 . chapter 1
hey
nice fic! i liked the non-sleaziness and the truthfullness of it. it was really well written and short n sweet too
sarah xoxo
Snapple92
2006-08-11 . chapter 1
That is not what I was thinking...haha!
FuchsiaII
2006-06-01 . chapter 1
Lol, yeah, I saw that wicked ending coming, but I think you needed to make it slightly clearer? Just a thought, maybe seprate the 'it' out into a single sentence when the words 'dinner party' are finally revealed, it's just the tiniest bit unclear. Could just be my opinion and lousy skin-reading,though, if so,ignore. :) Cool idea, that's for sure.
Bill
2006-05-30 . chapter 1
ha ha ha ha ha!
Dinner Party. I knew it had to be something like that.
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