Excellent story. Keep up the good work.

You ended it too soon, were you in a hurry to finish? (Pushes glasses up Kuro-style).
It was still good, though.

Now what?

Lol. "I'm Ian Malcom!!" :)

They handled that well. :)

Yup, this could be REALLY interesting... :P

It's Captain Kuro right!!?? It's gotta be!! :) :) :)

This could be interesting... :) :) :)

AWESOME! XD I loved this story from the beginning and the end was the best!

The ending was kinda short, but good none-th-less, lol. Awsome fic!!

lol! wish thatd happen to me. of course, i would know the second i saw them

Ne, ne? It's over?! T.T

Wow, after a few months stories are starting to end. Im glad to say I wasnt disappointed in yours, thought ^^ It was enjoyable and perhaps you'll continue with more One Piece? Nonetheless, ja ne- Kuro's girl-san :3

*cries because story is over* Man this was a really awesome fiction. I am glad that I found it, great job, I do hope to see a sequel but of course that is entirely up to you! ^_^

great so far updte soon

OMG GET THAT LAST CHAPTER UP