Reviews for More Comfortable in Hell

Reviews For: More Comfortable in Hell

numbnuts 2008-01-09 ch 2,	abusei love this story!! please do another chapter!
cancat90 2007-01-06 ch 2,	abuseI love this story, it is so cute. You should keep going, maybe add their vaccation, or even day to day life at DOD. Please update ASAP!
Shannonn14 2007-01-04 ch 2,	abuseplease do another chapter!
BrittanyLS 2006-07-09 ch 2,	abuseI absolutely loved this!!
Tigerlily Brown 2006-06-12 ch 2,	abusevery nice... that ending would have been better than the real one if you ask me.
JerseyJunk 2006-06-12 ch 2,	abusei really liked it. it's very well-written and the fact that both chapters are long makes it better. it'd be cool for you to continue it, but i won't make you. unfinished fics stink, huh?? haha. well again, it's a very well-written story and i like it alot. i'm gunna add it to my favs and put it on alert, just incase. ^_^
Vadergirl2006 2006-06-02 ch 2,	abuseI love this story and i would love for u to continue this story
24fan 2006-06-01 ch 2, anon.	abuseWhen I read Joe's girl's story I was sure Jack and Audrey couldn't have a future together. But you managed to do the impossible and wrote a happy ending! I'm not usually a huge fan of Audrey, but in this story I think she and Jack will be happy together. Good job!
Joe's girl 2006-06-01 ch 2,	abuseI just read this chapter again and it really is a wonderful chapter. I like that they both admit some fault with neither of them taking full responsibility/blame for the mess they've made of their relationship. I also like that you took my sad ending and gave it hope. When I started writing that ending for my story, I fully intended for Jack and Audrey to end up together, but when I wrote it, it was just too trite. I don't usually write sap and that was how it sounded to me, so I ended up making the ending sad and having them break up. When you offered to write a happier, more hopeful ending, I was happy to have you do it, but I couldn't figure out how you would do it and make it realistic but not sappy. Well you found a way and it was masterful. Your ending so compliments my story that it is as if it we sat down and wrote the whole thing together. By the way, I'd love to see you continue. I'd like to see if Jack and Audrey can be successful after such a rocky start. So, if you ask me, I'd say continue the story. I will certainly be reading.
MeredithandDerekfanforever 2006-05-28 ch 2,	abuseI really want you to continue this story. Please. I can't wait to read more chapters from you on any of your Jack/Audrey stories. Brandy
MeredithandDerekfanforever 2006-05-28 ch 1,	abuseOh no! you can't stop it there. You have to post more right now please. lol. I am liking this very much but would like it so much better if you got these two back together. Please post more soon. Brandy
M. Dobbs 2006-05-28 ch 1,	abuseThis is really, really good! PLEASE write another one! and make that soon! Anyway, nicely done, I think you've captured the characters very nicely.
Joe's girl 2006-05-28 ch 1,	abuseGood chapter! (Not the one you sent me, but a good chapter none the less.) Actually, this makes a better first chapter than the one I read. I assume you plan to use that as chapter 2. That will work really well. One minor problem (I'm sorry, but my family would tell you that I am the queen of anal retentive.) I am a time/continuity freak. Audrey could not have been born during the Korean war. It ended in about 1952. That would make Audrey over 50 years old now. She might have been born during the early 70's which would have put her smack dab in the middle of the Vietnam war. Jim Heller (if he is the same age as the actor who portrays him) would be about the right age to have fought in Vietnam. So that's my one sticking point. I love the conversation between Jack and Heller. I can see them in a bar talking over a couple of drinks. I'm not the biggest Jack/Audrey fan in the world (I really preferred Jack/Kate or the idea of Jack/Diane.) but I really want to slap both of them and bring them back to their senses. They are both moping around like puppies that were just taken away from their mother and can't seem to figure out what to do about it. Amazing what love can do to intelligent people! So keep writing and I, for one, will keep reading.
Aldea0402 2006-05-28 ch 1,	abuseAh Rez, you and Joe's Girl are killing me here! Make it better, make it better! LOL ::tapping my foot, staring at screen, waiting for the next chapter::

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