wow! these are all SO good! Great work

This is Sesshoumaru's view on his relationship with Inuyasha, am I correct?
I like it. What a great poem!

Cool. Very deep

A moving little poem. People don't always think that Kikyou's afterlife and actions have an affect on her sister too, and I think you've delved in that brilliantly in so few words.

That was BRILLIANT! So funny! Such a true description -_-U

Awesome!

GRAWR!

Wow that was deep and great.
Write more more!

--Subconscious Sentiments--

Oh thy words art cold as Winter's smile which graces upon thy lips,

And even though mine blood 'tis not pure mine heart ‘tis a willing avatar-

To see, to learn, to stretch these wings out of the furrow of thine eye.

To simply be, what I am.

-Hanyou, child, and man.

Thoust speaks of heritage and stains upon thine honor,

But wherefore am I in this?

Shall I feel shame for being different-

Canst thou renounce the erstwhile calling of lucre Nikes?

That like a ship set ashore went perambulating.

O what am I to thee, to the colossal view of Atlas?

Am I thou obligation, a duty-barren seed occult?

Art thou mine brother, fraternal ties doth hold?

O Dolorous recantation!

Canst thou be mine renunciation to these jagged wounds I bear?

For I was smite by fate on the eve ‘twas born-

To bear this mark of mine displeasure,

This marks against mine nature.

Doth Cupid in winged sallies not find it quaint,
To prick me with his arrow of love?

Am I not worthy?
Shall I not love nor find in Aphrodite’s warm caresses,

The gentle minx which brews?

Am I to be alone?

Desolate and cast astray?

Why canst thou love me?

-Dani.

p.s

This was my reply to your poem.