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| elotequeen 2008-06-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is Sesshoumaru's view on his relationship with Inuyasha, am I correct? I like it. What a great poem! |
| Sesshomaru'sSapphireMaiden 2007-05-20 ch 1, | abuseCool. Very deep |
| paynesgrey 2007-01-13 ch 13, | abuseA moving little poem. People don't always think that Kikyou's afterlife and actions have an affect on her sister too, and I think you've delved in that brilliantly in so few words. |
| Almandine-Azaleea 2006-12-17 ch 4, | abuseThat was BRILLIANT! So funny! Such a true description -_-U Awesome! |
| Fenikkusuken 2006-10-16 ch 11, | abuseGRAWR! |
| Dark-Lady-Shippo 2006-10-07 ch 1, | abuseWow that was deep and great. Write more more! |
| hentai18ancilla 2006-08-27 ch 1, | abuse--Subconscious Sentiments-- Oh thy words art cold as Winter's smile which graces upon thy lips, And even though mine blood 'tis not pure mine heart ‘tis a willing avatar- To see, to learn, to stretch these wings out of the furrow of thine eye. To simply be, what I am. -Hanyou, child, and man. Thoust speaks of heritage and stains upon thine honor, But wherefore am I in this? Shall I feel shame for being different- Canst thou renounce the erstwhile calling of lucre Nikes? That like a ship set ashore went perambulating. O what am I to thee, to the colossal view of Atlas? Am I thou obligation, a duty-barren seed occult? Art thou mine brother, fraternal ties doth hold? O Dolorous recantation! Canst thou be mine renunciation to these jagged wounds I bear? For I was smite by fate on the eve ‘twas born- To bear this mark of mine displeasure, This marks against mine nature. Doth Cupid in winged sallies not find it quaint, To prick me with his arrow of love? Am I not worthy? Shall I not love nor find in Aphrodite’s warm caresses, The gentle minx which brews? Am I to be alone? Desolate and cast astray? Why canst thou love me? -Dani. p.s This was my reply to your poem. |