 DarkRavie 2006-10-13 . chapter 2I like what you've written so far. I can't wait to read your next chapter! |
 makacatori 2006-10-11 . chapter 2Hey this is great! Please update this sometime soon!
-TK |
 Orange Roxas 2006-10-07 . chapter 2wesome start please update soon. i would put more, but i have yyh to watch and i love hiei.
much love always
hope x |
 Lil-Goddess-Hotaru 2006-07-26 . chapter 2Nice story so far! So they're in Texas? I'm wondering how close Sasuke's going to live to Naruto, how far was the drive there? Like, hours? Sasuke's description was nice~ And I can't wait for the next chappie! Good luck! |
 XxXinukaiXxX 2006-06-18 . chapter 2Aw thanx I like your's too. It's creative. This is a great story and it's cool how you explain Sasuke. Ha, it's true he has a feminine face. Everything in the story seems to be going fine please update ^^! |
 Dark Iasha 2006-06-03 . chapter 2Wa!1You have to update soon!As short as it is,its been great thiugh Naruto is acting a lot more childish than usual!(Then suddenly with fire in her eyes)You must update fast otherwise I will jump of a mighty high cliff that has a big net held by a giant helicopter in display of youthfull protest!How could you leave it at such a cliffhanger!
Note from sister watching Dark Iasha jump around dancing a protest dance:If you think your nuts,you haven't met my older sister yet.
DI:I am more youthful than Rock Lee and I am not crazy so you better update before I commit suicide!
Sister watching DI drink a whole flask of hot chocolate:Please update your story soon...I'm scared for my poor sister.She's drinking too much sugary stuff.
DI:Update!Update!Update!(go and dance the dance of 'Updatedness')
Sister: -O.o- |
 FMA-lover16 2006-05-31 . chapter 2Oh this is definitly going to be intersting! Great chapter! Loved it! Please update soon! |
 Jadej.j 2006-05-31 . chapter 2Good start hope to read more soon |
 OHHHsnap 2006-05-31 . chapter 2Hey, I like this fic. :) Though I'm not a big fan of shonen ai, this is good.
I like it!! So update soon!!
**Rashida** |
 BeuitifulDisgrace246 2006-05-31 . chapter 2LOL that's probably *exactly* what my friends would be doin if we had 2 wait that long. lol and we wuld have probably broken MORE than the elevator...lol like...vases...and other expensive various things heh heh. I bet it was fun though...wasn't it? =D NE WHOO...2 get bak 2 the fic...or whatever I ramble on about...-_- NARUTO AND SASUKE...THEY...THEY...-faints- Hiei-::pokes bd246 w/ a stick:: hn. Bd246: ahh...okay im bak now! I LUV U HIEI! ::huggles Hiei:: Hiei- ::storms off and "hns":: okay so yea! I luv this fic so far! ^.^ oh yea what wuz I sayin about Naruto and Sasuke...OHMIGOSH THATS RIGHT! THEY THEY THEY...-faints again- okay yea lol not gunna go through that again...well...THEY MET! AND SASUKE AND OR NAURTO SAID SOMETHING TO THE OTHER PERSON! yayyayayayayayyay! They met! soo flippin happy you didn't prolong it cuz i wuld of gone crazy! (not like that hasn't already happened...) but...YEA! o yea the reveiw response...I wish writing wuz my life...it wuld be awesum! well...i can wish...;_; ne whoo...yea good luck with the next chapter! luv how its goin so far!
~BeuitifulDisgrace246~ |
 Midnight Shining Star 2006-05-31 . chapter 2Cool, you updated! Anyways I like the chapter and can't wait to see what happens next! |
 blue-genjutsu 2006-05-31 . chapter 2Yay, hot Sasuke entered the story! Can't wait to see them interacting! :) |
 TrvrTnt7 2006-05-30 . chapter 2Hehe! More More! Just kidding. I like it, very good plot. Keep it up! |
 yukaishepards 2006-05-30 . chapter 2I love this chapter! heh heh, Poor guys having to wait for their rooms. Great first time seeing Sasuke! heh, cant wait for the next one! |
 yukaishepards 2006-05-29 . chapter 1I like it alot! cant wait to reac the next chapter! |