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Reviews For: Seeping

marisa alexndra 2006-12-27 ch 1, anon.	abuseaw thats soo sweet!now datz love, it was cute!! me likey! can't wait to read more of ur stories! marisa alexndra the cooler and sexyerest person ailve!! LOLXD
Music Of The Ocean 2006-10-16 ch 1,	abuseNICE!
Aceber 2006-07-16 ch 1,	abuseThis is a really cool story. I love the repetitions. It makes me think of all the traditions and restrictions imposed on them. And then at the end, "And then she hugs him, because she wants to." It's really well written. It's nice to read a story about emotions where it doesn't involve all the "classic" forms of love. ie, kissing. The way you used long sentances is really cool. It provokes a sense of the child in Mariah watching the child in Ray. It forces you to slow down and notice the small things in life. It might be because I love writing in this style but I feel that it connects really well. You should do more in this style. I love it. ;)
Aquarius Galuxy 2006-06-09 ch 1,	abuse=D Very beautiful! I like the way the "because it is the right thing to do" changes to "becacause she wants to". =) Very large significance. ... I can't believe I missed this fic... =D Shall have to check FFN more often. I'll add this to the ReiMao C2 comm. ^^
Angel Sakura x 2006-06-02 ch 1,	abuseO.O Wow... this was really pretty. I loved the line," Because it is the right thing to do"... You are such an awesome writer! ~AOD
hippy.intellect 2006-06-01 ch 1,	abuseOh my gosh, this is so awesome! In truth I don't really know the fandom well, but this is such an amazing display of writings. I love the ending.
Jashomara 2006-05-31 ch 1,	abuseI am reviewing this fic, because it is the right thing to do and because I want to! This was a great one-shot! So beautiful and deep. I loved it!
thiscowhatesmilk 2006-05-29 ch 1,	abuseaww... such a pretty story... it's so... pretty. Like it's not awesome or good or beautiful or cute or anything... like the only word to describe it is... pretty. ^^ loved this!!
RedWheeler 2006-05-29 ch 1,	abuseThis has got to be one of the best Mariah/Ray fics ever, it was amazing. I haven't read a lot of fics featuring these two together in a long time, and I'm thrilled to see something like this, especially since I've been looking for them recently. Stupendous job, this is definitely going on my faves!
Mao_Ayanami_pl 2006-05-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseHey there! ^^ I really liked the fic! It was really nice, specially dthe e4nding, when it say "because she wants to" , it was so nice ^^ The feathers part is about the battle against Kai, isn't it? Well I really don´t know, the only thing I edo know is it was excellent, keep on writing! Well, c ya other time n.n
Winter Ashby 2006-05-28 ch 1,	abuseOh my Goodness! Oh my gosh! Oh my, oh my... I think I'm hyperventilating! This was, perfect, amazing. I freakin' love you for writing this. I can't believe you wrote this! It's like it's just for me! And, and the feathers from Kai were like a time stamp to let you know when this takes place. Oh the waterfall, and the hair down. Ha ha ha ha, oh dear lord, you've turned me into a Rei freak. I can't... I can't stop myself. When did you write this! It's so good. And it's semi-fluffy, kind of. It's caught the exact perfect distance between angst and fluff-ish-ness. It's just all around... perfect! I think I'm getting a little too excited... oh well! The style is unique, and the images you use... I think you're a better writer than I am now. I also see that you have discovered the beauty of One-shots! Yes, welcome to the dark, obscure, plot-less side. This was a perfect example of why one-shots are great. And I can't even begin to tell you all the parts I liked. The memories seeping, the waterfall, the moon, the ground under their feet, the repetitive ‘on an on’, ‘waiting and waiting’... and of course the constant theme of 'right to do so'. And then it is perfectly accentuated in the last action ‘because she wants to.’ Even if I don't know the story... it doesn't really matter. I can't tell you how happy I was when I signed on and saw the update! I'm so happy that I added you to my alert... but with this, you've been bumped up to my favs! Along with this fic. It will be the only Beyblade on my list... but it's so good. I've read it three times already. Wow, this is really long, but I know you're squealing the whole way. Oh goodness, Rei is so yummy. You perfectly captured the yumminess that is Rei. And I also noticed you used Rei and not Ray... hum did you always do that?? I can't remember. All I know is that I flippin' love this fic! Okay, I’m done now. I’ll see you later and gush over you some more…... -Ash
PureBlackRaven 2006-05-28 ch 1,	abuseThat's so sweet. But isn't that kinda like Episode : Kai and Ray, the ultimate face off ? Maybe it is ! Anyway, you write pretty good stories ! WRITE MORE !
Chelseamuffin. 2006-05-28 ch 1,	abuse... Feathers? Where did the feathers come from? Lol, it's been too long since I've had a chance to watch Beyblade. Betcha I'd understand if I had the chance to see it recently. But no-o! Lol, sorry, having a good ol' SD moment there... Yeah. Right, well, I liked it, especially the ending. "And then she hugs him, because she wants to." That was just so cute! Well, I liked this a lot. Is this the one that you were trying to make simpler sentences with? Because it's working! It was simple, yet very good! Nice, SE! LURVED IT!

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