Nice!
they are to stubborn! and i think what u wrote is the truth!
love this part :"She won't admit that she hates watching him walk off to satisfy his needs at a brothel, not knowing when he'll come back, or if he will.
He won't admit that he bites her name off his tounge when he's laying with his whores." (

aw

Poor Mugen! T_T I liked this story a lot. I can see that happening to Mugen.

aw

so

sad

Aw! poor Mugen! - I usually don't read drabbles, though I used to be on a mailing list where lots of ppl wrote them- anyway, I like it. :D

I really liked the repetition in the first part. It has a certain rhythm to it that is just gorgeous.

The ending is certainly bittersweet. Great job.

Omigosh they were very much in character! It was so cute!!

" This one was kinda poorly thrown together, I'm afraid"

really?!?!?! because for me.. it was like... woah!

this was cute.

Poignant, real, telling. Everything about what they won't admit is so true and so believable and so them.

Love it, absolutely. You did a wonderful job. :)

(and if that is what you produce when you simply 'throw things together' then may I suggest you throw things together more often? *grin*)

pretty cool

Oh, I thought this was so cute!

I enjoyed it very much.

A very nice fanfic. I think I like this line the best : He won't admit that he watches her when she's watching the ronin, and he hates not knowing whats between them.

Good job.

I love this. I know it's repetitive. But gawd, I love this. It's so real and believable. I particulary like the lines,

'She won't admit that she waits up for him, anxious to see if he returns or not./He won't admit that he rushes himself to get back.'

Because it just made me laugh so early in the morning and it will prolly make my day brighter everytime I think of that. Oh oh oh, second read-through I loved this line as well.

'She won't admit that she picks fights with him over nothing to vent her jealousy and rage. Once he comes in the door, she'll find something to yell about, it doesn't matter what./He won't admit he knows what the real problem is, he'll just raise his voice and shout insults back. He'll never let her see how much it hurts when she screams-'

That. Was. Just. Adorable. Just purely cute. And I know I'm rambling, but wow. I wanted to squeal. I don't want to squeal that often when I read fanfictions.

Okay. Again, I loved this and and and, gawd. This is awesome. Fuu and Mugen were in-character. And YAY. I'm favoriting this and you. Great job. Much love towards you and your writing.

Too bad it was NOT poorly thrown together! I was reading it and going...WOW! This person can write! ;0)