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| Darlin 2006-07-08 ch 3,  | abuseVery intriguing this take on young Ororo. I would think N'Dare, fresh from Africa, might be interested in at least voting but she's in your hands and rather capable ones in this story. I'm still enjoying it. Great Hera, eh? Curious choice of gods for Ororo to exclaim over. |
| Shinikami Dragon 2006-06-28 ch 3, | abusethat was SO cute, aw, i love it! can't wait for the next chapter! it was absolutely adorable! |
| henred5 2006-06-26 ch 3, | abuseAww..how sweet was that. I myself learned the hard way puppy dog eyes don't work on my parents when i was about eight years old. hehe. ~henred5~ |
| Stefbug 2006-06-26 ch 3, | abuseOh man, that is just so cute. They have to be the most adorable kids ever. I'm so glad that you updated this, I'd almost forgotten about it and now its back in the forefront of my mind. You write them so well as children, I can't wait to see more. Stef |
| Saucy-Duck 2006-06-26 ch 3, | abuseI love her innocence. Did she remember to bring the toys? |
| Saucy-Duck 2006-06-24 ch 2, | abuseI really like this, but am a tad confussed. Obviously their mutations havn't surfaced yet. Taking a not so wild guess and saying that James is Logan. This is a very creative story, unlike any other one I've read. PLease please continue. |
| Shinikami Dragon 2006-06-05 ch 2, | abusewow, that is so major cute! You HAVE to continue this fanfic! Don't leave it there! Please continue soon! I'll keep reviewing! I PROMISE! Keep up the good work! |
| IMHO Nienna 2006-06-03 ch 2, | abuseYou know if you'd read over your stuff more and fix the mistakes instead of putting it up any ole way you'd be one of my fav authors cause you always come up with original ideas like this. I'm lovin it! |
| Darlin 2006-06-03 ch 1, | abuseI think this is absolutely adorable, BW! I read this at the StormwomanoftheX yahoo group just before I left work the day you put it up. First I thought - he stole my title! I have a fairy tale I wrote for NaNoWriMo last year with that title but of course there's no way you could know that now is there? ;D But I love this, it's so cute. Now I need to read the second chapter. And, hey are you entering the Storm fan fiction contest? You should you know. Just a quickie maybe. |
| henred5 2006-06-02 ch 2, | abuseby mature do you mean like..teen years? that would be pretty wicked if that was what you meant. Brill chapter! ~henred5~ |
| Stefbug 2006-06-01 ch 2, | abuseThis is a really interesting start. And they are so cute as kids, I can't wait to see how they grow up. So please, write more soon. |
| Bluie Twilight Star 2006-05-31 ch 2, | abusethis is such a sweet story!! I love the ending to this chapter! Keep it up! I can't wait to see what happens next! |
| henred5 2006-05-29 ch 1, | abusecool so far..really neat begining! |