 Fall out of grace 2009-11-30 . chapter 10so...since i'm supposed to be working on a four page essay due first thing tomorrow, and not reading (or reviewing for that matter) your delectable story of awesomeness, this review is going to be minorly lacking in some stuff. i apologize in advance. :3
anyways, i would like to say that the way you made roxas in denial for as long as he was and as he was made this seem very realistic...at least in my opinion. i wouldn't know for sure because i'm not awesome enough to have a gay lover. i know, shame.
i am really in love with roxas' friends too...i really wish that everyone was that accepting in real life, and i have some great friends who reflect the same (or similar) awesomeness that you have put into everyone. i also like how kairi isn't a nasty **-** in this story like so many others seem to portray her as...i dont really play KH games (stupid lack of sony ps2 and such, but i am rather hooked on 358/2, which got me into the KH fandom...and i'm rambling. i shut up about that now.) so i dont really know her personality, but since she was, you know, kinda not playing that minor of a role in the games, from what i understand, she is not the bitchy-** that is seen everywhere. however, that does not make the story bad, and i've seen a couple awesome fics with an evil!kairi in them...and i'm rambling again. crap.
sure the high school storyline seems to be quite well used, but what i DONT see enough is the high school storyline written WELL. see? there's a difference. and this happens to be the current minority of what i'm seeing out in the KH!HIGH SCHOOL stories and such so far. (again, not to say that there aren't any GOOD high school storylines...rambling. shutting up.)
now, imma gonna have to cut this short, cuz i'm still a couple pages short on that essay, but i'm first gonna reply with one more thing...
HOW DARE YOU CUT THIS CHAPTER OFF WHERE YOU DID?!? -angry- that's. just. not. cool. got it memorized? see? it's bad enough that you made me steal one of axel's lines. IT'S. THAT. BAD. i mean, a lot of awesome stories leave off at the worst places, but...you wouldn't be mean enough to leave it there, would you? ...would you? -kicked puppy eyes-
anyways, i'll stop taking up a chunk of your time to get back to my much hated essay...-cough-readingthoughsomeotherstores-cough- :3
Akani |
 rio 2009-09-02 . chapter 1 I just read the entirey of this story in one, and i love it! Your writing is very easy to read and you can understand the characters as well. Please please please update soon! I realise you only update infrequently but it's so good, and I really want to know what happens next between Roxas and Axel! |