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MarauderDaughter
2009-12-09 . chapter 10
Noo!! You left us on a cliff-hanger! >.<
This is an amazing story; you are a brilliant writer!! Please update soon!!
~MD
Fall out of grace
2009-11-30 . chapter 10
so...since i'm supposed to be working on a four page essay due first thing tomorrow, and not reading (or reviewing for that matter) your delectable story of awesomeness, this review is going to be minorly lacking in some stuff. i apologize in advance. :3

anyways, i would like to say that the way you made roxas in denial for as long as he was and as he was made this seem very realistic...at least in my opinion. i wouldn't know for sure because i'm not awesome enough to have a gay lover. i know, shame.

i am really in love with roxas' friends too...i really wish that everyone was that accepting in real life, and i have some great friends who reflect the same (or similar) awesomeness that you have put into everyone. i also like how kairi isn't a nasty **-** in this story like so many others seem to portray her as...i dont really play KH games (stupid lack of sony ps2 and such, but i am rather hooked on 358/2, which got me into the KH fandom...and i'm rambling. i shut up about that now.) so i dont really know her personality, but since she was, you know, kinda not playing that minor of a role in the games, from what i understand, she is not the bitchy-** that is seen everywhere. however, that does not make the story bad, and i've seen a couple awesome fics with an evil!kairi in them...and i'm rambling again. crap.

sure the high school storyline seems to be quite well used, but what i DONT see enough is the high school storyline written WELL. see? there's a difference. and this happens to be the current minority of what i'm seeing out in the KH!HIGH SCHOOL stories and such so far. (again, not to say that there aren't any GOOD high school storylines...rambling. shutting up.)

now, imma gonna have to cut this short, cuz i'm still a couple pages short on that essay, but i'm first gonna reply with one more thing...

HOW DARE YOU CUT THIS CHAPTER OFF WHERE YOU DID?!? -angry- that's. just. not. cool. got it memorized? see? it's bad enough that you made me steal one of axel's lines. IT'S. THAT. BAD. i mean, a lot of awesome stories leave off at the worst places, but...you wouldn't be mean enough to leave it there, would you? ...would you? -kicked puppy eyes-

anyways, i'll stop taking up a chunk of your time to get back to my much hated essay...-cough-readingthoughsomeotherstores-cough- :3

Akani
Princess
2009-11-21 . chapter 10
You seriously need to update! Pleease?:D
vicious91
2009-11-18 . chapter 10
Amazing story!
Hope u are going to continue it. Please update?
musiclover1933
2009-11-14 . chapter 10
shocker! don't forget to update before the tension wears off. :P

how 'bout getting the band to sing Check Yes Juliet by We The Kings? i love that song. ^^
Lonely Sorrow
2009-11-08 . chapter 10
hello, love the story so far amd please update soon =)
Roxas-Chan
2009-11-06 . chapter 10
make more.. chapter...s ...
Cazzylove
2009-11-04 . chapter 10
OMG POOR ROXY ^_^ UPDATE SOON you know you want to ^_^ ^_^ ^_^
love peace and chocolate ^_^ ^_^ ^_^
Blessed Be ^_^ ^_^ ^_^
Cazzy ^_^ ^_^ ^_^
byamon
2009-10-19 . chapter 10
Please tell me are you continuing this, I love it!
The Dudette 86
2009-10-19 . chapter 10
Dude, you seriously need to update xD
You can't just leave us like this! I've been so addicted to this fic and then...

Well anyways, I really like your writing style. Love this sotry :D
Corin teh Neko
2009-10-16 . chapter 10
OH WOW!! I started reading this last week and I recommended it to 3 of my other friends (they freakishly love it btw lol) XD I hope you update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next =)

PS. I wanna punch Larxene so badly right now D8<
Princess
2009-10-02 . chapter 10
PLEAASE UPDATE!
goddess-chan123
2009-09-15 . chapter 10
ur leaving me hanging here! all i want 2 do is click the button 2 the next chapter, but its not there! do u not luv ur reviewers, is that it!? T_T update faster!!
rio
2009-09-02 . chapter 1
I just read the entirey of this story in one, and i love it! Your writing is very easy to read and you can understand the characters as well. Please please please update soon! I realise you only update infrequently but it's so good, and I really want to know what happens next between Roxas and Axel!
Syolie
2009-08-30 . chapter 10
Please update soon!
I want to know what happens next! So much suspense XD!
I'm really enjoying this fanfic.

Syolie
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