This fanfiction is so asome;please write more I love it!

Funnily enough, I can imagine Bakura singing that and dancing to it. ^^ A fun image, it makes me giggle. Great story!

I thought the fight scenes were great o.o Even if you had to work your ** off for them, it was worth it. At least, from a reader's point of view. I'm sure I'd have trouble with a fight scene if I ever actually write something that needs one -.-; But the point is that the whole thing kept me interested through it all. Though, it was fairly obvious that nothing serious could happen to Marik. And Isis got to meet a knight. Aw.
I didn't really miss Bakura during this chapter. I like him in the fic and I hope he's in the next one (it'd be weird otherwise) but this chapter did just fine without him :3

update soon

yes~! i entirely agree! there's enough depression with real life XD

i'm glad i read the authors notes, 'cause after reading the last two paragraphs, i felt my angst radar going off ><
oh noses... poor Malik.. poor Bakura..

ANYWAYS, i can't wait for the long awaited showdown between Malik and Bakura to occur 8 D

write more!

Aww :3 I was mentioned! I'm so happy that I helped give you the motivation you needed xD <3

But oh my god D: So much sadness in this chapter. I'm still getting over Bakura's heartbreak and now Kaiba's heart is being broken, too D: This is just all so upsetting! I hope you're right about this happy ending thing, because I will be seriously depressed if it's all sad.
I really loved the part with Isis. At first I was flipping out because she jumped off the cliff! But then she was with Malik and saved it and it was awesome! I liked how that's how you had Marik get out of his predicament instead of him just doing it on his own. I mean, Malik's awesome and all, but he can't do EVERYTHING on his own. And poor Marik D:I bet he was freaking out when Isis just jumped off like that. And he was looking for her and all. I thought that was really cute ^^ (By the way, I'm sorry I refer to the hikari as "Malik" and the yami as "Marik," it's just a force of habit -.-) And when Atem kissed Isis' hand! Oh my gosh, I was so happy :3
D: BUT THEN THE HAPPY DIED.
Allister D: I feel so bad for him. I mean, Kaiba tried to help him and all, but he obviously couldn't see it. And then Malik comes up and calls the "traitor" his best friend! Poor Allister thought he was doing Malik a favor!

AND THEN THE HAPPY WAS BLOWN INTO BAZILLIONS OF TINY LITTLE PIECES.
I'm really confused on the relationship between Kaiba and Malik. I mean, they're obviously very close. But HOW close? Sometimes I worry that Kaiba's going to realize he adores Malik inexplicably and run away with him and Bakura's going to be sad and alone and kill everyone in the Labyrinth out of sheer misery. But then I worry that Malik's gonna go up to Bakura's castle and they're going to be married and Malik's going to become Queen (for lack of a better term xD) and Kaiba will be the sad lonely one. D: And no offense, to Kaiba, but I REALLY want Malik and Bakura to live happily ever after :3 But Kaiba needs someone too! I don't want him to be sitting in a cottage all alone and not talk to any of his friends and regret whatever's going to happen! I hope he can at least find his sister and be happy, and it would make me SO happy if he could find someone to love romantically~ I want it to be a happy ending for Kaiba as much as I do for Malik and Bakura.

I apologize for my epically long and rambly review D: I tend to do a lot of these -.- Please update very very very soon :3 I want to know what's going to happen with the exchange between Bakura and Malik~ (and the happy ending D: my heart craves this happy ending)

I am so very pleased to read this story again! I definitely thank the 100th reviewer for bringing you to work again!
I don't care if there are people more talented than you, it's your writing that I want to read!

I am about to explode from excitement! the part with Malik and Isis was oh so fabulous! and next will come the moment that I was expecting since the begining of this story: THE END, the EPIC end! AND THE NEW BEGINING of the sequel!!

Excellent job, and thank you for your efforts, they are appreciated and loved!

Yay! This is my favorite crossover story ever. You've got real talent in the character development and plot section. (Even if the basic plot is Henson's...) But the extra details and subplots are excellent!

D: Don't have writer's block. I love this story and you haven't updated it in a while D:
So, I've pretty much had to explain this to a million different author's, but I've been an epic lurker for a while and just decided to start using my account and leaving reviews and writing stories and such.
I adore your story. To pieces. I love the fairytale-esque aspects of it and the pure innocence of Malik and Bakura and everyone. This story is just so beautiful. It makes me quite happy ^^
But I.. I couldn't believe it. Malik just... he didn't even care about Bakura's confession! Well, I know that he did, but still! Poor Bakura! It really broke my heart. I just... I was so desolate.

I'm sorry. I owe you a much bigger review since I adore your story so much, but I can't really think of anything right now. But please update it soon, I need to know what's gonna happen!

Wow, I really like this.
I usually dont ever review on the first chapter of a multi-chapter fic because I like getting a good picture of the style and story before I praise (like what if I dont mean the good things I said after I read on? le gasp!! Id feel awful!). However, I saw your profile where you said you have passed the YGO fandom phase. How sad. Oh well, I want to say that Sun-chan (even though shes only gotten to chapter one and needs to sleep so she cant really continue at the moment) really wants you to continue the fic :D

So far of what Ive seen, I like your style and I love your writing. More often than not, the first chapter of a fic is relatively decent, but not so much that you are surprised when you realize later that the grammar is awful and the characters terribly portrayed (as you can see, Sun-chan gets disappointed a lot in the fanfic world DX ). But you had me with the first paragraph. Good vocabulary, but not overly used like someone trying to be poetic, and yeah!

I was also pretty much drawn in by the owl, too. -whispers- I honestly havent seen the Labyrinth... Though, for the record, I DID looked up the trailer as some two minute research before I started reading. I just thought your fic was happy making because I read a good KHR fic recently that had a character possess an owl...yeah...very off topic...ugh, Sun-chan happens to ramble when shes tired...or likes a fic...or both XD

Case and point, I like it so far, and I dont want you to give up D: Even though Im super behind, keep up the good work :D

PS, I shant spam your reviews every chapter with terribly long raving like this until I get near the end, I promise. You dont have to worry about this becoming too regular XP
-Sunny

I really like this story.
I mean really, really, really like this story.

It's one of the best written YGO or Labyrinth fic I've ever read.
Update soon please!

so very cute! your story combines my two favorite things!

Your update made my day! It was unexpected, good surprise!
You made an awesome chapter, and thank you for the extra lenght, you are so generous with us, it made me all happy XD

things are really tense, and you set up a lot of trouble for next chapters, I am SO IMPATIENT to read the rest!
Bakura's wrath is understandable, but not at the same time! I missed all the other folks!

I imagine that the first part of the story is nearing its end, I am all thilled, because I dreamed about the second part before even starting the first chpter of this perfect story!

Keep up your excellent work, I am still a lover of your beautiful words!

Ke! This has to be my all-time favourite chapter ever!

Baw Poor Bakura! He gave Marik EVERYTHING and the stupid boy had to go and remember Mokuba and bounce off the bed!

I have to admit, I do like how we are able to see the Real World and what is happening to them; it's nice to see that they're learning that they've been terrible parents/siblings towards Marik!

>.< The final battle will be awsome to read, but I imagine heart-breaking for Bakura! So I reall really can't wait 8D.

Hi there!
I stumbled upon this story through Rannaty's profile. Well actually it's the second time that I've stumbled upon it and fortunately I remembered that it was really good.
What I didn't remember was the actual storyline and so I decided to start from the beginning once again =^o^=
Thanks to that I didn't notice how late it got (I was just wondering why my brother was in bed already) and just now I realized it was two a.m. ô.Ô Congratulations, you managed to distract me for about four hours without me realizing anything ^-^
However, now I'm going to sleep - I havent read the 11th chapter yet since I wanted to do so once I managed to keep my eyes open ^.~