|Reviews for Best Enemies: Redux|
| riverkirby 4/17/13 . chapter 15
LOL the subject is not closed
| Dudley 4/16/13 . chapter 10
LOL James stop laughing lol HE'S loving it
| SilverOsprey 7/29/12 . chapter 12
"fourteen foot scarf and a sack of jelly babies..." HA! you just made my day!
| smileyGGfan 7/21/12 . chapter 15
This was an amazing story! I actually found your work through a Google search about Jewish wedding customs and your story, "A Simple Jewish Wedding" came up in the results page because you mentioned why Jews don't use the "Wedding March" or "Here Comes the Bride." After reading the Jewish Wedding story and a few of your other one chapter stories, I knew I had to start at the beginning to see your origins of KiGo with "Best Enemies Redux." You reminded me how much I love the Kim Possible universe, and I thought that this was a very well-written and developed story showing their relationship from enemies, to friends, to hopelessly in love with each other. I look forward to reading your other sequels! :)
| Akiho Tonoshi 4/8/12 . chapter 15
gotta say, I FUCKING HATE IT when someone all like "you love me I love you but I'm gona hurt you so I wont even try" suck it up Jesus fuck.
Ok sorry about my profanity. All in all great story . ummm... *shrug* i think i'll try and sort through you jumble of stories for the sequels
| bluerose45 9/12/11 . chapter 12
is that where rinacat from
got it from i love that scene
| bluerose45 9/11/11 . chapter 10
best story love it
| Twisted-Wun 8/26/11 . chapter 1
One of the best I've read. I much enjoyed this one.
| Mengsk 10/21/10 . chapter 15
It's like how they ended the Soprannos. Everything going to hell, the FBI on the verge of taking him down, outstanding issues everywhere and it end's with Tony sitting down to have dinner as a family.
Sometimes leaving a little mess is a good way to wrap up a story, even if you do not plan a sequel. It was a good ending. Those referrances to how much Shego hates mind control in almost every chapter finally become relevant. Hearing that over and over again was becoming irritating. WE KNOW!
Drakken didn't think some of these happenings were odd? I really hope you did not have him take this lightly. He truly values Shego. He's as loyal to her as anyone in his life. Hearing about this is going to be a deep hurt.
| Mengsk 10/21/10 . chapter 14
I wish I could honestly say young people in love have more tact than Kim displayed at that dinner. They honestly don't. Annoying little passion stuck monkies. How awkward for Ron. How rude of Kim.
Point of contention - Giving weapons to the Osama's boys, who could have seen that turning around and biting them in the ass? Honestly? Besides, it worked. The Soviets were mauled. Getting involved wasn't the problem. Funding for schools and infulstructure suddenly drying up when they were of no more use was the problem. I think they realised they were used.
Overwise I see you're point on how Director wants her Justice organisation to remain just. Pusishment fitting the crime. Are you sure stealing a component for the intent of building a weapon of mass destruction does not incure harsher penelties? Already she must have racked up multiple life sentences on escapes.
| Mengsk 10/21/10 . chapter 13
What the hell did they put in the pepper spray? That's non-lethal? Designed for crowd control? I don't mush like protesters either but those little bastards have good lawyers.
Worst security ever! Those guys with guns just going to sit back and let Anne go in when they have someone on the cam? Letting a family member of the apparent victim call the shots! What about Betty? Neat trick with the passover but she never made a move!
Shego a tad obsessive. Where is Ron?
So it becomes clear where they stand on their feelings but clarity marks new complications. This feeling between them is not there private. Not when it endangers the interests of their respective allies.
| Mengsk 10/21/10 . chapter 11
See. Much more subtle. Much more effective.
At this stage I would be having Drakken realise something was very wrong and had him approach Ron with a plot to destroy their friendship for the good of both of them. Or simply have the coffee shop blown up. If you've left him with a spine at all after subing as cheerleader for Kim he would not take this betrayal lightly. But, hey, I'm evil.
Does Yori want Ron or does Sensei want his genetics? An MMPowered next generation would be a great asset.
| Mengsk 10/21/10 . chapter 8
No Ron on the mission huh? No Ron to be found anywhere really. I get that you're trying to do this from Kim and Shego's point of view but keeping track of background characters is important. His opinion on the decline of Ron night perhaps? Where does he stand on Kim's catostrophic romances?
You had Drakken chear? Does no one understand the concept of a villain anymore?
| Mengsk 10/21/10 . chapter 6
She's having coffee with a wanted felon and the talk was about relationships?
I'm detecting the subtle, as a swift kick and a rodgering, shift to relationship drama. I was hoping you would play this out and not make it lust at first sight. Let them grow on each other.
Although, I'm too demanding. Any other authors this many chapter in they'd be on their honeymoon.
Interesting how it is Kim who keeps saying as gay or crush, not Anne or Monique. What the other girls are saying 'could' be read that way of course (very, very, heavily) but they don't say it.
Who says they have to be gay to enjoy each others company? Felons need to express themselves too! When they realise they have no one, boy, can they find unlikely people to confide in!
| Mengsk 10/21/10 . chapter 5
Oh, so you're educating Kimmie in the grey slice of life? One of my favourites. Only there are different shades. It's more complicated than boom, the terrorist dies or headshot, Ron is saved.
Hego was the only one who did the decent thing.