I'm so wetting myself right now!
I loved the bit where Mullroy and Murtogg couldn't sit down- EW! I'm laughing so much i can barely write this.
"Naughty undies"!
Thanks for enlightening me on this most interesting subject!

I laughed SO much my sister asked me what the matter was.. so funny..
That was foul and nasty but i laughed so hard..
"gay pirate, girly blacksmith, and sexpot Lizzie." - Nice description..
I nearly wet myself at the bit when Murtogg and Mullroy couldn't sit down... ew..
"Later will ask Lizzie if she wants to see my sword of justice" - Sprayed drink over keyboard..
Still laughing...

Hahaha! Oh god, this is great...I love James!

Zomg! XD v.brilliant, mate! I think I like Norry's better than Jacks, acctually...gods the "Tried to propose to Elizabeth and she fell over a wall. Probably not good sign." had me in stitches, you are awesome! Keep up the awesome! Much more love(awesome) - CPOP

Fantastic, as hilarious as the prequel. Great job!

Oh my freaking GOD! That was HILARIOUS! I nearly wet myself laughing so hard. (Suggestive as that sounds...)

God, that was the funniest thing I have ever read. I want another one for the second movie! =3

Really rather like this. Yes, definitely, quite Pythonesque, rather Fast Show, almost english comedy.
Do more!
Huzzah!
(BTW first hand knowledge of British military can confirm some of them actually say this. For real. Without blushing. No really.)

Omg, I nearly ** myself reading that. 'Crapsicles' made me choke on nonexistent soup/juice. My dog looked at me funny.

And somehow all of that made sense. I can *almost* see it happening. Everyone knows that someone who seems that repressed is really rather *not*, underneath it all.
Hehehe. Anyway. Exceptionally funny. Every time I watch POTC now I'll be thinking Spoon Incident and Naughty Undies and 'Did You Know Interceptor Sounds Like Intercourse'?

omfg that is hilarious! Especially likes the naughty undies bit. Norrington is so OOC it's genius. Him and Gillette would make a wicked couple. Ta!

Oh my...hopefully you meant that to be funny, cuz I laughed thru the whole thing. Can't watch POTC in the same way anymore...

ROLF! this is soo a fav!

Omg, that was so beyond messed up, but yet I loved it. Hm... lol.

Laurel B.

LOL this was hilarious!

This is simply brilliant. I love it!

...Yay for naughty undies!...Yay for Norrington!...Yay for slash! Yay for...uh...stuff! Very funny/cute/..uh...yay for naughty undies!...Well done :3