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Astarael Darkrah Black
2009-09-30 . chapter 8
Gah! I am so jealous of little Kenta. An APGAR score of TWO! GAR! I wish my APGAR score had been that high. Oh and I love this story.

Astarael Darkrah Black
E.A.V
2008-10-09 . chapter 8
I loved reading these stories, and I hope that you will continue from chapter five of the vacation story!
Asgeras
2007-11-13 . chapter 14
Wow...what I way to end the fic, huh? I'm kind of surprised that it took this long for the Amazons to come up with a rebuttal for Ranma releasing their secrets. It will be interesting to see what happens in Book two.

Overall, this was a great little fic. Thank you for releasing it! The spelling and grammar were great and the subject was pulled of in a conceivable fashion (...err...besides the whole magic curses and shtuff :P)

Thanks for the fic and I look forward to reading more.
Asgeras
2007-11-13 . chapter 5
Still loving the story. Just a quick comment, then I'm off to read more.

Although it would be a little uncommon for a woman not to know most of the ins and outs of pregnancy, it's not completely unheard of. I'm not going to go into too much more detail, since this topic is still a bit embarrassing for me (which is ironic, considering the fact that this is akin to anonymous).

Then again, I'm not sure of how such subjects are treated in Japan...so I guess you can at least partially ignore what I just said, if you know the Japanese culture when it applies to this matter.

Whatever the case, thanks for the fic!
Asgeras
2007-11-12 . chapter 3
Wow...I have to admit that this chapter threw me for a little bit of a loop. Particularly the end. Not that there's anything wrong with a good crying session, and it IS a lot easier when one is pregnant, but that still caught me by surprise.

I honestly don't know where you're going to head with this story, and am starting to look forward to the journey. Once again, thanks for the fic.
Asgeras
2007-11-12 . chapter 2
To be honest, I skipped over "Spirit Walk". Despite the fact that everyone seems to love it. Even without reading the precursor, this fic makes a great deal of sense. Thanks for that.

I'm almost right behind Nodoka when it comes to her earlier sentiment. I've heard of loving oneself, but this is ridiculous. :P Then again, where Ranma and magic are concerned, nothing is ever straightforward, ne?

Anyway, thanks for the fic, and I look forward to reading more.
deitarion/SSokolow
2007-07-24 . chapter 15
Unbelievably good. When all values are averaged, it ties with Sarge4's "Couch Trips" for best pregnant Ranma fic I've ever read. It is without a doubt the best for how you did it, but I really like Couch Trips for having so *many* "variable" kids.
Rose1948
2007-06-21 . chapter 15
GREAT story! I'm looking forward to the next installment!
Zarz
2007-04-19 . chapter 15
This is really great! I loved seeing Ranma as a girl for all this time. I'd also love the chance to see some of what they went through in those ten years. I loved the part where Ranma's staring at the financial report - you really had me worried there! This is a great story, and I'm looking forward to the next!
CatOnFire
2007-03-04 . chapter 1
"Takahashi-sensei made it pretty clear throughout the series just who was going to wind up with whom and I have simply taken her lead."

What you said above I completely disagree with. While Takahashi-san implied that some people where more than likely going to end up together, the fact that she ended the Ranma½ manga with no clear-cut 'winner' to the fiancee race showed that Ranma still could marry ANYONE (though not a guy). Akane didn't marry Ranma ergo it's not definite whether or not they will be married.
Penguin Lord0029
2007-03-03 . chapter 1
cool story
Alex Ultra
2007-02-12 . chapter 15
My eyes are telling me I'm tired, but the rest of me just wants to get to refilling my batteries, both the ones in my stomach and the ones in my ki.

Stupid ki. It's supposedly great when you've got it, but whether it is or not it still sucks when you run yourself dry. -.-?

I really like this story, but instead of pulling a long, thought out review here, I'm just going to move on to the next installment, which I already saw in your story listing so I know it's there.

See you there! (Sorta.)
Alex Ultra: Finality In Femeninity
LATER
Gregory Silverman
2006-11-10 . chapter 1
great story i look forward to the next installment
Ari-AdiAx
2006-11-06 . chapter 15
Aw! This story is just so cute and unique! I enjoyed it a lot! Keep up the great work! Can't wait 'til book 2!
bornagainpenguin
2006-10-24 . chapter 15
This and the story that spawned it are excellent fics! I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your fics as well, now that I've read this...

Please update with the beginings of the next book in this series soon, or I'll hunt down Raven and send him\her\it to haunt you!

--bornagainpenguin (iWindoze)

PS: It was Nabiki who made those games, wasn't it?
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