Everything was good, until the third to the last sentence. Frankly, that spoilt the whole thing.

please write more i loved it all and want to know what happens next it is good and i loved it all

I just watched the movie today and fell in love and went to find fanwork and...and... this makes me sad D=
And if it makes me sad that means its fxskin awesome, so mucho kudos.

i think u shoulda changed the ending (the last paragraph) and keep going! it would make a great story. the last paragraph makes it seem rushed

WAH! This story made me cry... Poor Wolf. He went through so much!

omg! another good one! XD alittle sad >>; but a happy ending :D lovely one shot :D *high five* i love reading your work its fun X3 lol well talk to ya latter!

~DocOck

Wonderful, I went through several reactions when reading this. I'm so relieved that they'll make it right, but it had to be that way.

It's all brilliantly written, but I especially love the end paragraph. Great job with this, I look forward to your next.

Beautifully done, this is one of very few fics which inject any tension into the relationship between Wolf and Virginia, exploring the darker sides of both characters. I've pondered what Wolf's reaction would be to infidelity on the part of Virginia. Would he instantly forgive her, and let it slide, or would he react the way he did in this story after being betrayed?

Also curious to know a bit more about Virginia's feelings on what she did with Wendell? Did she do what she did stritcly because of the love potion, or was there a bit more to it?