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Reviews for: Because They Were So Keen
Novocain
2008-09-30 . chapter 1
Truly well-written - I love how you've gotten inside of Maladict's head. Your characterisations are spot on, too. Excellent work!
Shiro Ryuu
2007-07-10 . chapter 1
Wonderful. I liked this bit - "Mum!" said Maladict. "What a cunning disguise you're in!" - and that bit - It was a shot in the dark, but then again,... she had very good night vision - and the bit with the hug, and just all of it ^_^
Ormandria
2006-06-01 . chapter 1
I like it! Very well written!
random pineappleness
2006-05-30 . chapter 1
I think I may be your first reviewer. How nice for me ;)
Your characterization is first class in all three drabbles. But, I loved Strappi poring through their belongings- it was so petty and seedy. Also loved Mal and Polly in I- particularly Polly as it was interesting to see her as a supporting character, rather than the main. Ta muchness for this, it was lurvely =D
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