Reviews for Waiting By The River

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Starshadow of the Tok'ra 2007-09-15 ch 4,	abuseI read this and its sequel on Geekfiction - wanted the unedited version. Heh. Anyhow... this is one REALLY well-written story. I was glued to the screen til I finished both stories. I've been suffering from some kind of stomach bug in the last few days and "Waiting By the River" and "Lost Passage" really helped pass the time... so thanks a lot! And trust me, I loved the unedited versions.
redlace76 2007-02-28 ch 4,	abuseshakes her head in wonder I don't even know where to begin... The characterization, the plot, the elegance of a story that just flows... I have read a lot of fan fics... here and elsewhere... but this story overwhelmed me. Your powerful way with words, and the way you use these characters' emotions as the window to their hearts and souls is pure talent at its best. I have several favorite authors on this site... and you just became one of them. Thank you for this story... this is a work to be proud of.
sidle419 2006-08-19 ch 4,	abuseI enjoyed this story thoroughly. The plot was different from other fanfics I've read. I really liked that there wasn't hardly any mention of Gil and Sara doing... stuff. Sometimes it just ruins a story when people decide do go all "lemony" directly in the middle of a great story. The ended just holding each other. It's good. I especially enjoyed the attack part in chapter 3. You were extremely descriptive when descibing the scene. "pain exploded in Grissom’s chest as he felt his shoulder dislocate." I absoulutey loved that line. I know that it's not much of a phrase to quote, per se, but it really made me feel like MY shoulder dislocated- pain explodonding in my chest and all- and it worked. A great story, especially when you lose your muse for a little while. I definentely know what that's like! Thanks for the hard work- sidle419
windbound 2006-06-09 ch 4,	abuseThat was very,very interesting and well written.It's good that I waited until it was all posted because the suspense is killing. I'm glad you picked up on the Homebodies case, it was a very powerful one and also I liked the way you handled the relationship between Grissom and Sara,in a tender and subtle way. (and thanks for the phtoography link-awesome!)
leddy 2006-06-06 ch 4,	abuseThat was a sweet ending and a very enjoyable read. It was nice that they were both able to find comfort with their nightmares. I would think after an ordeal like that it would take some great comfort from each other to get over it.
LosingInTranslation 2006-06-06 ch 4,	abuseWhen I saw this one was complete, I started reading... And I have you to thank for getting almost nothing done at work tonight LOL Excellent job! You did a fantastic job of conveying the pain they both seemed to be carrying around. I was completely taken along on that journey and I wanted to thank you for that. :D
Domo Arigato 2006-06-05 ch 4,	abuseThank you for this beautiful story and for giving "Homebodies" the post-ep fic it deserved. Oh, and thanks for the connecting door, too ;-)
Mystical G Panther 2006-06-05 ch 4,	abuseTHAT WAS AMAZING!! I LOVED IT!! -MYSTICAL PANTHER
odeepblue 2006-06-05 ch 4,	abusethe story was amazing, truly beautiful and unique ;)
xyber116 2006-06-05 ch 4,	abuseThis was great. But I'm wondering if you actually meant to put some sections doubley. At the begging and end. If you did than great but if not then maybe a beta would be good. Thanks for a wonderful fic.
jtbwriter 2006-06-04 ch 4,	abuseWhat a wonderful-heartbreaking story! I love that Gris figured it out, no more alone-no more bad nights without comfort. Thanks for the realism of this-and for the "ladybug" references-very moving. I look forward to your next tale!
gsrshipper 2006-06-04 ch 4,	abuseAw, I'm so sad to see this story come to an end. Great job, and I hope to see more from you!
xyber116 2006-06-04 ch 3,	abuseI can't wait for the rest of this story. Will there be more between Grissoma and Sara? This is so great.
gsr4ever 2006-06-04 ch 3,	abuseI love this story. I always think about what a meeting between Sara and Grissom's mom would be like
sparky-chan123 2006-06-04 ch 3,	abuseto be honest I kinda got lost around the begining... but it made more sense as I went... this is a great story and I can't wait to read the final chapter. Keep it up!

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