 theharshlightofday 2006-10-13 . chapter 8*marks out at mention of Poe*
Hehe. I *loved* this chapter. Lots of little intricacies and details that I immensely enjoyed. Kurtis as hot as usual. Plot as imaginative and fresh... The demon manifesting itself as an element was wonderful. I'm gonna have to be careful not to subconsciously copy your ideas of the Lux Veritatis when I write XD
And I deserve to be punished for reviewing so late. Is Kurtis free after his session with Lara? *innocent grin*
Linzi xx |
 Gaisha 2006-09-18 . chapter 8This story is awesome. I LOVE it. I'm so glad you updated, and I hope you update ASAP again. It's one of the most original fics I've ever read. |
 bm16 2006-09-17 . chapter 8Lol! I enjoyed this chapter. I'm looking foward to the next update! :P |
 damian-m 2006-09-17 . chapter 8 great chapter looking forward to the next one. I wish i had your writing talent. (couldn't be bothered logging in my e-mail is very long) |
 theharshlightofday 2006-09-14 . chapter 7Oh my god. You rule XD Yay! I knew you could pull off stuff between them really well ^_^
Hehe. Buffy references. Which episode were they watching, may I ask? XD
I really liked Kurtis opening up in this chapter. It seemed very natural, and nice and angsty. The piano bit was inspired! I really loved the line: “Why did I have to be born into a war?”
Your Lux Veritatis history interpretation is awesome too ^_^ Nice with the different Houses thing. I never thought about it like that.
And I swear I won't take so long to review in future. So lazy XD
Linzi xx |
 theharshlightofday 2006-09-14 . chapter 6Argh! It's Evil!Kurtis! XD
Hehe. I love the nonchalant conversation they have after the customary hug :p Brilliant dialogue, as always.
Ooh, and brilliant details of the house. Ah, 1980's references. How you we love them ^_^
But I still don't understand what's going on! *bursts into tears* Ooh, another chapter!
*perks up a bit and shuffles off to read more*
Linzi xx |
 Morpheanne 2006-08-29 . chapter 7 Acid! I love this story!! Great writing! |
 A-Madman-Chid-Motifs-Flu 2006-08-29 . chapter 7aww. cute, if that's karel so help me god i'll... not do anything. (yeah i'm a guy but i'm sensitive so don't think i'm a girl.(i don't know why i'm telling you this)) |
 Poppy Coburn 2006-08-29 . chapter 7I decided to leave you a review on even though I'm on the Sani (it's 'Bite Me', aka Lauren!)
I really like this story so far, and I'm really hurting that it is Kurtis, and not Karel, although he's making me twitchy because he seems a little...different...I know he died and everything but I still have my suspicions! You're very good at writing this type of suspense, very good!
I liked the LaraKurtis interaction, it was really sweet and it fit the moment perfectly!
You're whole style is good, I can picture everything in my head and I love your description of Kurtis's bedroom, especially the green snowboard! I can just see him as a snowboarder in his youth! Who knows, maybe he and Lara can go on a winter mission, she can ski, he can board ;-) hehe!
Overall, a great job! I'm really looking forward to seeing what you have in store for us next! I'll be sitting on the edge of my seat until then! |
 Ellethiel 2006-08-28 . chapter 7 Wow. This is great. Hehe, am so happy that there's been another update so soon, well, soon as much as I like it. Well, either this is Karel, and maybe he's trying to get around Lara's suspicions by outright denying what she thinks is possible, or it's Kurtis...in a weird way. Heh, maybe he's reverted back to a sort of personality and mentality he had before he really got into the mercenary work? bleh, that's out there but sadly the best guesswork I can do for now, lol. I can't wait to read the next chapters, definitely can't wait. Great ending for this one though, really is. And I really liked how he talked about his family, how they were extended families or not really related at all in blood but banded together to work and learn together under one leader. And it was cool how Kurtis said that he didn't have a right to mourn.
Meh, as a JKEBer, I can't help but half hope this really is Karel. But also on the bright side, it's still ok if it's Kurtis: this version of him isn't so bad either. :) And he got to kiss her, lol. Update quickly please!! :) |
 spitfire511 2006-08-28 . chapter 7KT does seem to have that effect on all of us, doesnt he?? anyways, another fabulous chapter, and i am thoroughly confused--which is thoroughly a good thing!
i can't wait for more (and i'm loving these updates...makes me think of another fic that could be updated...) |
 bm16 2006-08-28 . chapter 7Acid, yet another great chapter of this wonderful story. I can't wait until Chapter 8 is released. |
 Catlantean 2006-08-28 . chapter 7 Kurtis seems more like Kurtis in this chapter, but there still is something eerie about him (or it's just my wishful thinking :p). Never imagined he could play the piano, but then again he always did seem a full-of-surprises-type of guy. I wonder what it is that he's playing, but being as musically illiterate as I am I guess I'll leave it for someone else to discover.
Nice bits of LV info too :)
As for the Lara/Kurtis scene in the end, perhaps you did fade it to black but I somehow find that the image of the gun falling forgotten to the floor works quite well for me :) |
 Jordy 2006-08-28 . chapter 7 *squints suspiciously at chapter, and at resurrecto-Kurtie*
Did Lara just snog Karel? Because if so, you've pre-empted me, and it will be my painful duty to have you killed :p
I agree with Akkon, "Kurtis" is more Kurtis-like in this chapter. But maybe he's just settling into the role. One thing I find curious is that Lara still hasn't asked Kurtis exactly how he was brought back from the dead...maybe she has something up her sleeve? She normally does, after all.
Well-written as usual. I can easily visualise each scene. I hope the rest of it is coming along OK!
And now I have a strong craving for a Chinese... |
 AKKON 2006-08-28 . chapter 7:O Acid is writing romance?!! I'm dumbstruck.
About Resurrecto-Kurtie(LOL): In this chapter he seems more Kurtiesque than in the last one, ok. But his mother was a hippie? The Lux Veritatis lived in communes? Man, Acid, either you're on acid yourself or trying to render me speechless!
Fine, then. Round goes to you, 'cause I'm TOTALLY clueless of what's going on here.
Lovin' it, though. |