Its actually a good fic so far.
A bit tragedy here and there, and it will be worth to impress the best of the best too =)

Just keep it up.

OH MY GOD! Naruto's so sweet with Hinata! Its so cute! I just love it! Great job, keep up the good work, and update soon!

LOL Hinata is so cute when she's shy.

Yay! ^^ I do hope you find it in your heart to update soon! It'd be a real waste if you didn't.

I must say it's a pity that your not continuing this fiction because when first read it way back when I had such high hopes for this story due to not only how beautifully it was written but the sheer sweetness of the innocent romance (well mostly innocent, but I'm a pervert so all the better) and the unique world you created especially the idea behind The Warrior Born which really intrigued me and I had hoped to see it further explored. Finally I found your story to be quite amusing I really got a kick out of your "Super Happy Pervert Fan Dance" it was a small stroke of genius that was absolutely hilarious. I'm sad to know that you won't be continuing this fiction but I guess I can only hope that sometime in the near future you'll be inspired to either restart or continue this story until then.
Signed The God Of Perverts

Yo! Beta read this an age ago. Glad you put it up, even if you are going to discontinue it...you **! :p
Nah, tis your perrogative and the like. Just one day, finish one mate...

nice fic. the young naruto and hinata is a bit risky, but it is a very nice fic.

this is good writing right here. a level of this work should be continued. This is almost up to par with "two Halves", a somewhat legendary naruhina fic, but i think its deleted from this site. This is really good and you should write more chapters.

Boy, does Naruto have passionate dreams! ^^'' Anyway! Please do update!

I'm going to sound like a gaping idiot with nothing to say, but...
Wow. Just wow. You've got so much talent here.
I like the sort of mystical sense that you bring to this new world, but there's also a touch of realism. You know that life has both tragedy and comedy (as displayed by Jiraiya's "Super Happy Pervert Fan Dance"--I bust a gut just imagining it).
Is the informant with the Francescas Shikamaru? He's the only one I can think of with pineapple hair...
I was a little surprised when you said how Naruto was only 14 and Hinata only 12, but you write their interactions so well I decided that I didn't bloody care. The citrusy bits made me blush. Yow. (Now *I* sound like a pervert...)
Anyways, thanks for taking the time to read this long-** review. Update soon!

Extremely tender and romantic. I don't think you went too far, it was definitely limey, not quite lemons. I hope to see an update soon! :)

great story. SUPER HAPPY PERVERT HAPPY DANCE!! awesome story

Passionate,loving, and a truly stunning romance.
Please write more as soon as you can.
(I cant wait to see what happens...) :)

wow...just absolutely wow...i think that there is an excellent plot here! if you put in your own characters, you'd have yourself a book! i'm just astounded. its an excellent start, and i can't wait for more! keep up the awesome work on this story, and all of your other stories as well! -dawn-

To-hard-to-write-breathing-and-blushing-madly.
Damn that was good, and not just the romance, the explanation and all. Of all your stories, this HAS to be the best, it has a mix of everything and beautiful description. If you make this a one-shot I shall hunt you down and force you.