Reviews for The Enemy Within

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faith bonksie 2008-06-25 ch 3,	abuseOh please continue soon
Merga 2008-06-21 ch 2, anon.	abusePlease come back and write! I want to know what happens next.
Von 2008-03-07 ch 3,	abuseI am enjoying this story.. poor Chris! I like how you have Matt and Chris close to BEING close.. although I worry that Leo is too messed up to be a good father to either son now..
kerfuzzie 2008-01-07 ch 3,	abuseI'm really loving this story so far. One question: if Chris is in an alternate reality, then what about the Chris from that reality? Don't bad things tend to happen when the same person from two realities are in the same reality?
MargotTenn 2007-10-19 ch 3,	abuseGah! This story is fantastic! It's so interesting to see that Chris' basic goodness is pretty much rejecting the alternate world even though the world gave him back a father. And I am so intrigued that it's Matt who is figuring out how to get Chris back sort of like it was Chris who found Matt in the first place. I hope you plan on updating. It's been a while but I for one would still love to see more of this story!
The Charming Sisters 2 2007-08-19 ch 3, anon.	abuseThere is a lot of twists and turns in this story. I wish you can update it soon!
xCRIT 2007-07-22 ch 3, anon.	abuseGah! I keep waiting for you to update this story but it's not happening! Why must you torment us so? In other words, please continue this story. -Gets on hands and knees.- I'm begging you!
starwishes 2007-07-09 ch 3,	abuseWhat would happen if Darklighter Chris showed up? Would Darklighter Leo drop Whitelighter Chris like hot potato?? 0.0 poor chris. Love the story! HOpe you update soon!
Marcus1233 2007-05-05 ch 3,	abuseHm..not bad. Not bad at all. Looking forward for the next chapter.
Sakurabound 2007-03-07 ch 3,	abuseOh my word! I just finsihed reading the first story, and then continued with this one! It is amazing! I lovelovelovelove it! Gah, I hope you update soon! You are an amazing writer! You really are! Definitely going on my FAV!
TriNkIeS 2006-12-17 ch 3,	abuseWow... This is so cool! Actually, I had just found "Blood Strangers" from a friends favorite stories. It was one of the best stories I have ever read! Honest! It was simply amazing! I was absolutly captivated by the story! I couldn't stop reading till the end! ;) Afterwards, I couldn't not read the sequel! I had to! I would rather suffer then not read the sequel! Seems like its as great as the first one! Please, please, please update soon. I'm suffering from suspense here! You really know how to keep a girl at the edge of her seat! ;) I love your writing style and how you shift from different Point of Views! I love your plot, both for "Blood Strangers" and "The Enemy Within"! The concept of your stories are greatly thought of and are very unique! Great, great job! ;)
Mistress of Mystery 2006-10-24 ch 1,	abusei love the story plz update soon
Mistress of Mystery 2006-10-21 ch 3,	abusei love the story please update soon. It's great good twist at the end of (Blood Stranger)but please updated the emey within soon.
Amantine 2006-10-04 ch 3,	abuseTo put it bluntly: love the story. Please update soon!
drmcatcher 2006-09-17 ch 3,	abuseHi! I like reading your story. I look forward to reading more.

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