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| GraciePie 2006-06-02 ch 1,  | abuseI'm such a go-tard. It took me like, two minutes to figure out what scene. I...am...a...moron. But this story - totally awesome! |
| Marion the Geek 2006-05-31 ch 1, | abuseVery good. |
| ladybrin 2006-05-30 ch 1, | abusevery nic fic- i enjoyed this- and i wouldn't mid seeing more of this like when she sees him on the phone and whatnot-- that still remains my fav for season 5 |
| thewomanwhosoldtheworld 2006-05-30 ch 1, | abusegreat writing i would like to see a bit when goren confronts garnett and what eames would be thinking. |
| Tayfilly 2006-05-30 ch 1, | abuseHey, that was fun! Clever, smooth, and confidently written. I am on my way to check out your older CI works. =) |
| Angelfirenze 2006-05-29 ch 1, | abuseI really loved this. It was heartwarming and adorable, particularly given the chaos that happens right afterward. My only quibble is that I don't think Sherlock Holmes' hat is called a houndstooth. I do know that's a type of coat, but Sherlock Holmes' hat is actually called a deerstalker. Other than that rather minor irregularity, tremendously enjoyable. |
| Odakota Rose 2006-05-29 ch 1, | abuseYou nailed it, 'cause we all know she'd drop everything to get there. |
| Beaglicious 2006-05-29 ch 1, | abuseNice spin for a post-ep. Love the gift idea! |
| The Confused One 2006-05-29 ch 1, | abuseOH! I loved this. It was great. I had a feeling it was THAT scene, since it wasn't the courtroom scene. Great work. I love the idea of showing what she was doing before that. I guess she grabbed that report from her desk as she ran into the room. |
| InfinityStar 2006-05-29 ch 1, | abuseAlex is so funny. I can so totally see her opting for fun or sentimental gifts instead of practical ones. I can also totally see her dropping everything when Goren needs her. He did freak out about that...and he did need her, whether he realized it or not. She saved his ** on that one and nailed the judge as well, calling Carver and chasing after him. Nice job with this story! |
| deliriousdancer 2006-05-29 ch 1, | abusewas this the end end or just the end of the first chapter...cause I want to see him in the hat too. deliriousdancer |
| Anutheal 2006-05-29 ch 1, | abuseIt would have been interesting to see Eames walk in that scene with her shoe squishing, because of rain. But that's my distracted thinking. Good job. |
| TriStateCopFan 2006-05-29 ch 1, | abuseGood job! I've seen tons of stories (one by myself included) about the now infamous "letter scene" -- but this "phone scene" was just about as important/dramatic in the episode, too, and deserves some attention. Very nice! |