this is a great oneshot with an alternative ending of the deathly hallows. you have realised to have a true happy ending you must make someone/something suffer (in this case Bill Weasley and Neville). A great thing to write.
saz

I like it as a one-shot, it's written very well. It seems like J.K Rowling would've written this. Good job on portraying her style.

P.S You reviewed my story and I shall take thought into what you said. It will be hard to change it, actually, I guess I might rewrite it. This woman won't have a bunch of flaws, but enough. Please, don't forget me because I just had the most awesome idea. Thank you for your review, because I think my new story shall be much better.

Anyway, I always thought my story was rather dry.