thanks...great job...please update sooooooooon...

LOVE THE STORY! WAITING FOR AN UPDATE ON THE STORY!

Good, update soon!

I'm a bit disappointed how large a role Snape is playing compared to Sirius. Snape is not a nice man, he tormented not only Harry but his friends for years. It is rather disappointing that Harry would choose Snape as his mentor not Sirius.

Please don't replace Sirius with Snape. Sirius loves Harry and always has, Snape has protected him and may grudgingly respect him, but he's not Sirius.

Great chapter! I loved the confrontations, I'm glad that Harry was able to get that out of his system and maybe he and Snape will not have such a contentious relationship.

Cute chapter.

I like the story, I just don't see Sirius and Remus rolling on the floor laughing. When they were young maybe, but they are what 36 years old and Sirius has been through a lot - I don't see them as acting like that.

takes away magic? They could have pracited on Draco, who seems to only have a bit part in this story so far.

and a Happy Christmas (whatever year this was written) to you as well.

Errors don't really bother me...unless they are blatant and continuing. One ff author keeps writing 'pastetadded'

...as in: Dumbledore pasteteadded the house. I didn't have the nerve to tell her/him. Actually the story was great, if you didn't mind translating as you went.

I have the feeling this was a hard chapter to write. Sometimes the puzzle is a lot easier to create than putting all of the pieces togeth so they make sense.

WOW, congratulations! You're writing aa novel. For someone who has NO talent in that area, you have my admiration.

the last couple of chapters were an emotional roller coaster...andd brilliantly written

I know that by chaper 18 you have been writing this story for 5 years...but there is one great story that the writer only posts once a year...lol gives us something to look forward to. It's been dubbed our once-a-year-day!

So don't apologise for not posting sooner...when you DO it's worth the wait.

Oh no!

Remember Sirius was cleared after he died.