Egads! I seriously never would have expected that! I'm secretly glad Jak is homophobic, though. Only Tess could be in charge of the washing w/ laundry baskets THAT color. I swear, you always seem to capture their personalities and thoughts perfectly!

Also, if you ever happen to have time could you check out my newly-published J&D fic? It only has one chapter now, but I was hoping you could give me advice or let me know if anything needs tweaking.

Oh I read this on deviant Art! The illustration rocked with this! Loved the story, it was quite funny!

that last line from Torn was hilarious I always wondered if he was gay because of somw of the lines he said and some of the things he's done in both Jak2 3, and X

Lmao I saw the art for this on Devianart oh so awsome.
You can so imagen Jaks reaction.
^_^
Aino ná
Arowanna

ROFL!

I love it I love it I love it! And the picture on DA was great too!

Now that I am furiously attempting to catch up on all of my promises...

Time for the review I promised you...75 days ago. Good lord. I had no idea it's been THAT long. I thought it was just last month, but according to dA...

Anyways! I really think one of your stongest suits, whether with writing or drawing, is humor. Sure, you're wonderful expressing emotions with both art and writing, along with other things, but your knack for adding humor is always well-done. You always manage to keep everything humorous while keeping everything possibly realistic (even with random nearly-nude laundry days and gaping, bottomless holes the devour countries, parents, and pasts) and your humor has a bit of subtlty and is rarely blunt.

You also always have a knack of adding smaller bits of humor throughout whatever it is you're doing, while the concept as a whole would be humorous enough alone. In this, Daxter's comments about smelling, Jak punching out a guy and blowing up the vehicle (okay--you can do that in the game, but, realistically, would NO one notice and WOULD be just smirk at causing an explosion? ...I nope those are both no), Daxter going off on Torn and staring at Tess, and Jak freaking out about Torn's odrer. And in other things, like your recent Exiles picture, with the random comments. You always manage to add things within things to make them more amusing.

Okay, the story was amusing and entertaining. As for the writing and mechanics, you wrote as wonderfully as usual. Your dialogue, in particular, is one thing you excel at; you manage to squeeze a lot of character into a reasonably small amount of talking. Your setting descriptions are pretty good and getting better. In something like this, setting isn't all too important except for the most basic things.

The mechanics, though, I noticed a dozen or so errors. Not too bad in general, but in a story as short as this it can seem a little bad. I just thought I'd mention the fact, but most aren't blatantly obvious.

ANYWHO. Awesome job as always, Blu.

Torn's GAY! I so knew it!
Torn: That was wierd.
Hey! What are you doing here?
Torn: I've been declared officially back to normal. Care to tell me why Jak screams when I look at him, and why I was locked in a very small room, with Erol, for 5 hours?!
Don't lose it again or you'll have to go back. And nobody who doesn't have to wants to know the reasons for this.

Oh. I laugh! That last line was brilliant! Yay for you!

And a minor error that i found, being the reviewer that I am, you should change "Good Timing. Take of your cloths." To "Good Timing. Take OFF you cloths."

I knew what you ment, but it brings down the humor ever so slightly. ^-^

Good job!

*falls over laughing* Gaha, I wasn't sure what I was getting into when I read the summary but now I'm glad I did read it! *rolls on floor* Gay-dar...Hahahaha!

This was so funny! I love the whole "sock-sorting" thing. I think I just might join the resistance... hehehe wonderful images of Torn are flowing through my mind. I love laundry day!

Why haven´t i reviewed this before? oh well. I first found this on DA and read it there and when i found it here I just had to reread it. It´s so funny! I love it! Especially Tess and Daxter´s reaction to seeing her in her underwhere. Torn is brilliant too. This is a fav!!

FUNNY FUNNY FUNNY CONTINUED!

HAHAHA THAT WAS GOOD!! I'm going to laugh now...
Jak: SHUT UP!
Me: Oh wait. Tomorow's underwear. Jak, do you mind if I join the resistance?
Jak: Shut up Cody lover.
Me: *blushes* What do you expect me to say? Am I supposed to LIE?! ME?! Hmmf.

Oh my- Gay-dar! Haha! That was rich! And Jak's 'usage' of the brake. Great stuff. Loved it. Nice job! ^.^ Made me 'lol'.

OMG, IT'S YOU!! You! You left me a note on my deviantart page...haha, i always knew Daxter had gay-dar, just knew it *suspicious hand motions*
HA, ha..hee...ha...sweet fic dude