 Uftaki 2009-03-06 . chapter 3Wow... just stumbled onto this fic of yours; it's sounding awesome so far. :3 Kuzco and Yuffie are -hilarious- together! XD You have both of their voices down perfectly! :D Oh... summoner Kuzco? Interesting twist! (and neat way of having him stay with the party -- he's too amusing to lose once you leave that world. xD)
And yay! Magus! XD Working for the -Heartless-, yeah... no real surprise there. Wonder if any other CT crew are about? *grins* It's interesting, what you're developing here. Leon's repressed memories of the FF8 game; Seifer, Zell, etc.
Demyx's dreams? are interesting -- I've no idea what they could be hinting towards, but it'll be interesting to learn. Cool seeing Vincent, but the bit with Demyx left me completely confused. I'll chalk that up to stuff that'll be revealed later, though. ^_^;
I hope you continue this, at some point, because it really does sound interesting. You're developing quite the quest, and mystery, here. :) |
 Bringer Of Fears 2008-02-01 . chapter 3Great story so far, it's very interesting and creative. I love how you've managed to incorporate such a wide variety of characters. Though I saw that you haven't updated in a long time, please update soon! Don't abandon this great story! |
 bookworm0492 2008-01-30 . chapter 30_o, that last bit frightened me. But OH Demyx...was Demyx remembering some of his Somebody self? Maybe? *shrugs*
and I KNEW it was Vincent! I knew it I knew it! *grins feeling pleased*
and oddly enough 0_o I KNEW what world Leon and Yuffie were going to! It was the only other jungle disney movie I could think of. >_<
but what I DONT know is who those cryptic messages are coming from...third voice and second voice and so on...and Kairi? Confused much! But ...Larxene died? Even though she was a sadistic wench..made me feel kinda bad...was it Vincent that did it? and who was the message for I wonder? and her first request...hmm
but leon's past..that sounds a might interesting...and the thing with Seifer...but oh god >_< Kuzco's a summoner now? Hah..that strikes me as very funny...this outta be entertaining.
But yeah, Leon working for Hades kinda threw me for a loop..but an interesting idea...
but in short, I like it. Very cryptic, humorous, open to many possibilities and keeps me in a state of confusion while I slowly figure some things out. Intriguing..
But yesh, Love the story, totally faving, and I look forward to the update! |
 hinatasXbestXfriend 2007-08-24 . chapter 3More please!
*glomps Saix* |
 sckry 2007-07-21 . chapter 3Wow, this is an amazing fic, very original and well written too. You caught Kuzco's character wonderfully(which would of been a hard thing to do, I'm very impressed.)
Hope to see more of this soon! |
 UserShadow7989 2006-12-19 . chapter 3Beautiful. No grammer mistakes, no out-of-character moments, unique concept and flawlessly portraid feeling of mystery. I honestly can't see any way to improve this. Please continue this story! |
 odi8200 2006-11-11 . chapter 3Awesome story!! Please continue!! please! |
 Nameless 2006-08-06 . chapter 3 Strong plot, good characterization, and regular updates (I think). Why haven't you recieved more updates for this? I'm enjoying it thoroughly and hope you update soon. Demyx, with his split personality, has always interested me - why do I suspect that he's Rufus? That would just be to great. Please, continue! |
 rikuisundermybed 2006-08-02 . chapter 3 Um, what are the odds of an update here soon? |
 Tsunami Wave 2006-07-20 . chapter 3"But then, we're all traitors here. Aren't we, Braig?"
...o_O omgWTF Demy?
o, shiny, and omg SIAX! *glomps* yay! (secondfavoriteorgmemberw00t)
*cough* so, yes! I can't wait for the next chapter! ;D |
 Tsunami Wave 2006-07-19 . chapter 1*squees* omg, I've read this on Y!Gallery! xD *so happy*
yay! I'm tsunamichan from y!gallery, btw. *goes to read your other stuff, too* |
 Poseidon's Daughter 2006-07-13 . chapter 3So my guesses are that the “eye design” is another FFX reference and the thing with the stones/crystals is an FFIX hinting (?), or am I totally off? I do that x_x but on a lighter note…
I love this! XD
No, really. I do. You seem to have the characters down pat, something that’s fairly easy to envision but amazingly difficult to write, and for that, I have to say I really admire you. (And that I think your interpretation of Demyx is way cute.)
Anyway, looking forward to the next update. - Emily |
 rikuisundermybed 2006-07-12 . chapter 3 The blurb at the begining! It was . . .
YES! Yes to the power of three! Yes times yes times yes times yes! |
 Meinos Kaen 2006-07-12 . chapter 3Uhm... Now that I think about it, Kairi means Ocean, and Demyx uses water. Is there a connection? |
 AelWithAnX 2006-07-11 . chapter 3OOH! Very, very nice! ^^! Kuzco is going to join them, eh? Interesting... And VINCENT is chasing them!? Intriguing... And who is inside the stone? I wonder... DO UPDATE SOON! I'm not sure I understand the blurbs at the beginning and at the end... But I don't really think I'm supposed to. Keep up the AMAZING work! |