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| dancing dizzily in delight 2008-08-06 ch 9, | abuseOh...Heh. Of course Aspen was a girl in his past life - he was always a very feminine character. |
| Shang Leopard 2008-04-20 ch 10, | abuseOh. My. Gosh. THAT WAS AMAZING! okay, just need to calm down for a second... alright. This is crazy! Every time I finish reading one of your stories, I have the same response: "Oh. My. Gosh. THAT WAS AMAZING!" I must be starting to sound like a parrot now! In Chimera, the first one of your L.J. Smith fics that I read, I thought that Aspen was pretty cool, and then in Ripples, I loved that Cecilia was there, because you always need a Salone! Then after reading this... well, I'd happily take Tam's place!! I think that Aspen would have to be one of my favorite characters from your fics! ( I also loove Lace Stormstrong [I think that's right!] from Chimera!) That was bloody brilliant! I love that there is soo much intense action, and then these really touching bits, and then some parts when I'm laughing so hard I have to stuff a fist in my mouth to keep from waking everyone up! ( and that's because I stay up late after everyones asleep not being able to close the laptop reading your fics!! ) Whenever I show up to class with this crazy look in my eye and start freaking out and babbling nonsense trying to explain stuff in a rush... well, my friends have figured out that I have read another fic of yours. They've also figured out that I won't stop bugging them until I've exhausted myself and my toung! I can't wait for the next chappie of Ripples! Here's a rose for you!! - |
| crazy gal 4evar 2007-10-22 ch 10, | abusedat was an absolutely wiked story, i lurved it altho its kepin me in suspense bout Rob, wats gonna appen? ill av 2 read mo 2 find out... jus wanna say thanx as well, ur really reallt good, carry on... tc, xox |
| animus.vox 2006-07-26 ch 10, | abuseThis is such a lovely little story. I really like Tam and Aspen, both together and as individual characters. They mesh very well. I thought the plot twist was interesting as well, particularly since I perceive Aspen as a somewhat feminine character. On a side note, I think it'd be helpful if you'd put these stories of Ryars Valley into some sort of chronological order via the title. I found it difficult, because I couldn't figure out which story came first until I was actually immersed in reading them. |
| Sharri 2006-06-22 ch 10, | abuseThat was a good story. Will u make a story about Blue Malcefi and Chayota Irkil |
| CalliopeMused 2005-10-27 ch 10, | abuseAspen is an extremely lovable vampire. The entire backstory of a past love triangle gone wrong (and Aspen's hapless luck in having once been a girl- the entire character you have created fits) made the story all the more complex. I seem to be reading your chronicles all out of order, but each story only adds to the complex verse that is your stories. This could be published- if you ever do create a work that hits the publishing houses, please let me know. I may have said this before, but I have a very short memory for things I've said- I'd rather remember stories like this. I look forward to reading your works, both old and new- it may take me a while, to get through everything. That is not at all a sad event- a prolific writer of your talent is to be thoroughly enjoyed for as long as possible. |
| Indygodusk 2004-05-15 ch 10, anon. | abuseNicely done. I liked how tough and practical Tam was. |
| The great and masterful Yod... 2003-11-28 ch 10, | abuseThat was great...just read nightfire and remember. i so did not see that twist at the end of remember. i was reading ur comments about reviews and i noticed that u said that nightfire is the 6th fires of fate story. wot r the others? can u let me know plz? if u want my email addy is lauren_crazycat@hotmail.com.Thanx so much...bout 2 start chimera now! keep writing! |
| nahbia 2003-08-17 ch 10, | abuseSuch comic relief were Blue's lines..."maybe it's Maybelline" hahahaha! And the one about keeping his heart in a jar next to his bed...aww, I'm so glad Tam and Aspen ended up together! I need that after your absolutely horribly heart-wrenching ending to Chimera... |
| Sharmeen 2003-06-03 ch 10, | abuseaww! it's really good. can i ask, it Chimera a sequel 2 remember? mail me the answer : Sharmeen987@yahoo.co.uk very cute! |
| Sharmeen 2003-06-03 ch 6, | abusereally good, incredibly sweet! |
| Sharmeen 2003-06-02 ch 5, | abuseaww! sweet, they kiss! |
| Sharmeen 2003-06-02 ch 4, | abusetis really good, altho i find it weird how his reaction towards her keeps changing |
| Sharmeen 2003-06-01 ch 3, | abuseit's really good but i don't like the way she gave in 2 him so easily. plus it's kinda confusing when u use characters whivh u'v used in u'r other fanfic. eg, Blue, Toya |
| Sharmeen 2003-06-01 ch 2, | abuseoohh! cool. |