I somewhere that with seizures you don't get enough air to your brain and some parts of it start to die after a while. Its scary stuff.

This was one hell of a good chapter! Especially the discussion before the kiss and the whole kissing scene - it was lovely.

AHH! That was soo good! I hope Raidou makes the right decision! This is a really good story!

AHH THIS STOREY IS driving me cracy

I love this series!
excellent characterization of both Raidou and Genma, and its realistic how it doesnt immedietly work out between the two of them.
(i also love this pairing... there really isnt enough of it out there...)
great job, i am eagerly awaiting the next story!!

OMG OMG OMG OMG! This is so sweet! I love the kiss-description! I can actually see it! It like made my heart skip a beat! :D

Please update soon! I need to know that Raidou loves poor little Genma! Or not. But please! I heart this story!

Just caught up with all the chapters in your Unravelled series and I must say I've enjoyed reading it very much. I think you've captured the awkwardness of the situation very well and explored the feelings of both parties nicely. Especially Raidou's dilemma...how he's still uncomfortable with the idea but Genma is his best friend no matter what, and that alone made him willing to stay by his side, care for him and even consider the possibility of what Genma is offering. I find this strength of friendship, more than anything else, really moving. Looking forward to the remaining stories to this marvellous little series. *smile*

I am loving this series. It really shows that in reality (well as real as Anime can be) if you confess your feelings to your best friend, whether straight or not, you can't just expect them to swoon into your arms. I love your story.

Have you considered posting this series anywhere else? There is a Genma/Raidou community called Scars and Senbons. We would love to have your story there.

Here's the link:
http://community.

Really good work. I want more!

Part four -- thank you! I love this series and have so been looking forward to this. You made my night.

*loves you*

That was so suspensful! I was so worried for Genma, but it kind of seems like he has a really good chance right now. The kiss was so hot! Even if it was chaste, it was innocent hot, however that works. ^^ So the next chapters are on Raidou's decision? Can't wait to see how it turns out, is it going to be in Raidou's POV with a look into his head or is it going to be Genma angsting over what will happen? Either way, I bet you will make it great, you always do!

I love this series of stories, it is fresh and new, you don't seal with side, side characters that much so it's very refreshing to get a new fic with a whole new pairing. Most authors use pairings that are overused, but have lots of information and end up making all the characters OOC or messing up the story with the pairings. You're talented in the way that you take a new pairing and make it your own while keeping all the characters IC and making real life situaions, well, as real as you can get in the ninja world.

I'm realy enjoying this pairing and this story and it's all made possible by you! So thank you, I love a good piece of writing with an actual plot and solution! Hope to read the next one! ^^

I like this one, but why arent you posting it as chapters?

...;_; I LOVE this series. seriously. this fic was wonderful, and I can't wait to see how it ends. the kiss made me happy. ^^

AW ! That was awsome ! I loved how you portrayed them, it was very moving and subtle. Please, keep going !
XD