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| Jeminisoul 2008-06-29 ch 23, | abuseAw! Possibly the best RENT fic I have ever read, and defiantly the best MoJo. You didn't let them become OOC at all, your OC's were well rounded and believable. This story explains a lot, and I like the way the epilogue rounds it off. |
| Larien3 2008-06-09 ch 23, | abuseI just wanted to say that your story is truly amazing. The love that you wrote between Maureen and Joanne was so sincere and perfect. You captured the intamacy between the two characters beautifully. I admire you and your work. Thank you for the oppurtunity to read such an amazing story. You should really consider a career in writing. Brava! |
| Those-You've-Known 2007-03-28 ch 8, | abuseNeed to review so I could add it to my favorites... that's a review enough its in my favorites. |
| ihatemessbutiloveyou 2007-02-21 ch 23, | abusewow thnaks that was amazing |
| Elpheen 2007-02-09 ch 23, | abuseThank you for writing the perfect pre-RENT fic. Aside from the occasional typo, I cannot fault this. It made me laugh and cry in all the right places, and I can't think of them getting together any other way. I guess what I'm trying to say is, wow. Elpheen xox |
| GorgeousSmile 2006-12-14 ch 23, | abuseGreat story i loved it so much! |
| Lone Stranger 2006-08-19 ch 23, | abuseOh gosh! I can't believe I haven't reviewed until now! Excellent, excellent two chapters. I loved the epilogue...it was such a great ending. Everyone seemed really in-character, so it felt like the 'behind the scenes' story to RENT. You should do a sequel. :D -Stranger |
| Greenhell 2006-07-27 ch 23, | abuseYour writing is a true talent, every thing about this story was perfect. It's one of the best Rent fics I've ever read. I take my hat off to you and admire a wonderful write. |
| Iniga 2006-07-23 ch 23, | abuseWell, I've wanted to read this story for a long time. The thing is, I have a bad habit of reading at work, and I wasn't sure I wanted an M-rated story called "All Wet" going through my employer's internet filter... But it was worth the wait. This is about ten notches above usual RENTfic. The characterizations were beautiful. You showed Joanne's anal-retentiveness, her bluebood background, and her devotion to her work without ever making her cartoonish or cliche. The depiction of her workplace was brilliant, complete with an overbearing and obnoxious yet ultimately fair boss and a co-worker who should be fired for harassment but never would be. Meanwhile, you didn't reform Maureen into someone who would never cheat-- but you also showed that she was plainly in love with Joanne (and Mark, too). Your detailed portrayal of Maureen's energy and lack of convention (when she first meets Joanne or when she invites herself to Joanne's working lunch, for example) is amazing. I'm impressed at how much drama and suspense you sustained throughout the story even though the reader knows from word one that Maureen will leave Mark and move in with Joanne. (Oh, a random favorite scene of mine is easily the Roger/Joanne conversation. The closest thing she's going to get to a blessing from Mark's best friend...very mature and beautiful.) Anyway, great job. |
| Iron Kitsune 2006-07-21 ch 23, | abuseOMFG BEST STORY EVER! I love it so much. |
| Shan 2006-07-20 ch 23, anon. | abuseOh my god. You. Are. My. Hero. I LOVE YOU XD |
| Village Voice 2006-07-19 ch 23, | abuse*tear* Such an amazing ending. I just came back for a 3 week vacation and read this on I used to read it on livejournal, but it would've taken a while to find them, so I took the easy route. Great chapter. It was truly touching. Why can't we all have an ending like this? |
| maison de neener 2006-07-19 ch 23, | abuseOh gods, I'm so sad it's over!! This was seriously one of the best stories I have ever read. I loved the last chapter, where it started out exactly as the first, and even though I almost cried (several times) during it, it was the perfect ending to a wonderful story. Amazing job! |
| Amelia-747 2006-07-19 ch 23, | abuseWow, that's the best Rent story I've read in a long time. You captured the characters beautifully. Hope you write another story soon. |
| MoowitMi324 2006-07-18 ch 23, | abusethat was amazing great job |