You're insane.

oh god its to funny! XD! tetsu...bokken...PUPPY XD to much! i'm so adding this to my favorites!

XD Absolutely hilarious! I loved it, still pondering what the green slimy thing could have been though >>

Very funny.. I love it so much.. Keep writing!!

Haha... So funny, now, how charming could Hijikata get?

Tetsu... I think he looks more lyk a cocker spaniel... juz kidding

Wat was that green slimy thing?

Okita is wierd... e nice kind of wierd.

Susumu! drools

"Last one there has to commit seppuku" lol!

You come up with awesome ideas for this series!

Tetsu believing he's a dog...the battle of wills with Hijikata...and...Souji's dreams? Great stuff!^^

I forgot my password to my account so this has to be an anoym review :(

Lol, should have shaved Tetsu bald XD

Ha ha! Your stories are delightful. And you come up with the most original ideas! Tetsu, adamant that he's a dog? Hijikata vs Tetsu the dog? Okita's weird dreams? Bwahaha, loved it!

So Tetsu was outside playing with a shaved chow-chow rather than tied up in the closet, was he? I like how you've adapted the scene from the manga. Especially nice to see Hijikata turn on the charm. He's such a hottie! ^_^

my favorite parts:

"last one there has to commit seppuku"

Souji being amused by "watching the men scramble and scream in fear of a man who was not really all that scary"

Hijikata and Tetsu growling and snarling at each other- that was priceless!

And what a perfect Souji line: “Ne, Tetsu-kun, I'm so sorry for interrupting your sleep, but something very important has come up, and it is time for you to show the Shinsengumi what you can do!” I can totally hear Saiga Mitsuki (souji's voice actor, er, actress) saying that.

But as cute as this was, Susumu being attacked by green slime under a mountain of paperwork, and Souji dreaming about ugly princesses... uh... those bits were a little hard to digest. yup, I think you went just a teensie-weensie bit overboard with the wacky factor.

Can't wait to read your chapter story!

Ha ha ha! It was great! Your stories are so funny, and so in the vein of the tv show. I did feel a little sorry for Tetsu though! ^^ And I'd love to read more from you!

I hope you write some more since your series is really great. The dog idea is really unexpected but then, the more unpredictable a story is, the more fun it is to read. My favourite of the series so far is still Smile: the education.

I thought this was really funny! And it fit perfectly with the situation in the first manga. I think you should make another chapter!

This... is pure crack. damned funny

Blink-blink. Muahhahahah... I take it u were inspired by what happened in PMK manga vol 1. It is so ridiculous, it's hilarious. Well, I don't think there is a rule against using a diary format to tell a fanfic. If not, my newspaper fanfics are in danger... (I was thinking of doing one for another anime)