|Reviews for Can Sins Ever Be Forgiven|
| thorn 8/13/12 . chapter 13
| Annabel Willow 6/28/12 . chapter 3
oooooh qui isnt being very nice to obi...
| thorn 5/30/12 . chapter 13
Hey, great great story.
I luv it.
I also think that when you were typing you made guilt-quilt.
that was funny.
I also think you should fix it.
| Maen41 11/22/11 . chapter 13
Very well-written, and I loved the ending. I just wish that the rating was M, as that scene where we see how Obi-Wan has seen Harvey in his dreams was quite disturbing. Other than that, I liked it.
| CosmicEssence 7/1/10 . chapter 13
good angst, rather creepy in parts...was kinda hoping the ghost would help out though and lovely ending. Not too mushy. cheers
| RoMythe 2/4/10 . chapter 13
Truly beautiful. It almost made me cry, and that torture part was really nasty; that kidney.. br... However, you did a very good job on this!
| TheMacUnleashed 1/29/09 . chapter 13
Great story! You had some awesome dialogue there, and you captured the angst perfectly.
| Jedi Ani Unduli 7/5/08 . chapter 13
will you continue it? it's very good!
| mlinyaia 1/24/07 . chapter 13
this is such a good story wel done!
| Justice of the People 9/4/06 . chapter 10
I really liked the second section. I didn't think it was too graphic, everything that you put was necessary.
| Justice of the People 9/4/06 . chapter 8
Ah poor Obi-Wan. I really liked that line about how the only clean flesh was wear Obi-Wan's tears had washed away the blood. That was great.
| Justice of the People 9/4/06 . chapter 7
I'm not sure that they have karma in GFFA, but oh well. Writer's prerogative.
Anyway, I liked how you've discussed every person's different sins in this chapter. It's kind of bringing things together.
| Justice of the People 9/2/06 . chapter 6
“Stop monologuing and get to it.” Hahahahahaha I nearly fell out of my chair when I read that. Owned Xanatos, owned.
Xanatos: Shut up, I only monologue because my brilliance needs to be recorded.
Yeah whatever. It's so true though, Xanatos DOES monologue. But that was a great freaking line.
O torture scene. In a FF7 (you must be getting so sick of hearing me talk about that) fic I'm working on I totally get to torture Tifa. Torture scenes are fun to write, but hard to read. I'm totally cringing at that pully-thing. EW HIS SHOULDERS DISLOCATED. EWEWEW HE PULLED OUT HIS KIDNEY?
That was a spifftastic torture scene. Gross, but spifftastic. Xanatos is so crazy, I love him and I'm creeped out by him at the same time. Have you ever heard the song "Vendetta Red Cried Rape on a Date with Destiny" by Vendetta Red? It's a song entirely about torture, I bet you'd love it. You should look up the lyrics.
| Justice of the People 9/2/06 . chapter 5
"come to where your first sin against me was committed. Here began the circle, and here it will end.” That was an awesome line, I loved it. I liked the promise at the end too, it reminds me of Cloud and Tifa. Friendships like that are really, really sweet I think.
It's fun to be mean to Obi-Wan. In my fic he gets severely injured in like, every other chapter. I don't know why, but hurt/comfort is so much better when it's him. Obi-Wan gets kidnapped by Xanatos too, but my fic is slash so obviously it's very different. Ah, poor Qui-Gon's in the dark.
Anyway, good chapter.
| Justice of the People 9/2/06 . chapter 3
Gosh Qui-Gon way to be a jackass.
Xanatos: Finely someone else sees.
Me: I wasn't talking to YOU. Anyway, I just realized that the title of this story is "Can Sins Ever Be Forgiven", which I guess makes me kind of slow, but I got so excited when I read it. It's like that line in Final Fantasy 7: Advent Children. And I can see the parallels between FF7AC and your story that you drew to choose that line as your title. It makes me happy.
Xanatos: She's easily amused.
Me: Shut up you jerk. Anyway, I'm off to read the rest.