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| Deathscythe139 2007-01-30 ch 7,  | abusegoing really well mate! keep it up! |
| Gogu the Great 2006-06-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is a great story. I'm at the 3rd chapter now and i'm starting to like it more and more. It's very well written, your grammer it's superb compared to what monstrosities lurk around here :P (a couple of missing apostrophes and capital letters never hurt anyone). Your skillz at describing a situation are good and i like the way you logically integrate everything (such as the grav buoy explanation and others... it's very well put together). Keep it up i love it ! Fics as good as this are hard to come by! |
| Xeno the Hedgehog 2006-06-01 ch 7, | abuseDoes she ever escape? |
| mike loeven 2006-06-01 ch 1, | abuseIN REPLY TO ANTAGONIST well i do admit that i stink at grammer it is my vocabulary that makes me a good writer but i cant find someone to help me edit my stories if anyone wants to voluntere for grammer and spelling i would be happy by the way you will also get to see the next few chapters before i post them on the site |
| antagonist 2006-06-01 ch 6, anon. | abuseI like it so far, although I suggest you acquire a proofreader... I've counted quite some errors with missing apostrophes, spelling and some should-be capital letters written with small initial letters, for example: “Fine ill just take them both,” said victor taking a shock grenade and setting the dial to max. I'm sorry if this offends you, but you asked for critique in the first place. I like the story so far, and I hope I will still like it once it's finished. |
| Spacefan 2006-05-31 ch 4, | abuseWell, I'm curious as to what Cassandra is--a hybrid or a xenomorph? And, if she is Xeno, she expresses herself like a human. Most stories about Xeno's portray them as a hive mind, so it will be interesting to find out how a hive-minded Xeno has become a solitary hunter (or whatever her occupation is). |
| Spacefan 2006-05-31 ch 2, | abuseWell, interesting story. Not sure how I missed this one, but good fic so far. |
| tasha 2006-05-30 ch 3, anon. | abusethis looks to be a very good story - im looking forward to the next chapter! |