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| yosafbrig 2008-10-12 ch 20, | abusewow, that is one awesume fic! its a great story, believable moving and i can't wait for more! i love it how some outcomes can be avoided by such little things and both harry and snape would b happy, but then you accept the reasons why they didn't, and thats why its more believable, and the tragedy of it makes it moving. i can't wait to see how snape reacts when he finds out harry is lucas! is he going to write to harry maybe? has boris told snape about the letter? you would think Snape would notice how much of a loner Harry is like he was at hogwarts, oo or maybe he walks in on lucas when he drops his "harry" mask. i love snape but i hope he feels real bad about how he imedeatly dismissed harry like that! and he shuld! i guess we all have our prejeduces and he had reasons to believe that harry woulddn't be different from the other potters but at the same time he had no reason to believe harry was the same! especially sorted into slytherin! argh! LOVE IT! |
| Depper92 2008-10-11 ch 19, | abusewell i just learned something today: you cant review a chapter more than once. i guess i read this story a while ago and i just read it again and wanted to let you know thats its completely awesome and there are no more chapters left which makes me sad :( please write more! i at least need some big event where snape finds out harry is lucas. PLEASE i will give you a hug! well not really but maybe a computer hug?!?!?!? |
| evil-sami-poo 2008-10-10 ch 20, | abusethat was soo sweet! I hope Harry will soon have a better life... I can't wait for Halloween |
| slaysvamps 2008-10-10 ch 20, | abuseThis story is awesome. Please write more soon! |
| OddlySane 2008-10-10 ch 20, | abusePlease update soon! I really like this story, it's so different from all the other plots! When will Snape luv Harry? :'( |
| green ninja93 2008-10-08 ch 20, | abuseReally a sad, though awsome story. You keep Harry as not super powered but just plain cool which I do like. Also nice job on getting the emotions of the characters really expressive and detailed. I loved it and hope for some more soon. Thanks XD |
| neokid93 2008-10-08 ch 20, | abuse...i love this fiction...it makes me cry its sad and i hope harry/lucas gets a break soon but i still love it i hope you update soon *sniff* T-T |
| InuyashanKagomerlovers 2008-10-07 ch 20, | abuseWonderful fic! It makes me feel sad for Harry... I always thought he'd make a good Slytherin though. Update soon! |
| Milky Etoile 2008-10-06 ch 20, | abuseThis story has one of the best plots I've encountered in HP fanfiction. It is so intriguing that I can hardly wait for the next chapter! Not that I'm pressuring you about that, of course, chapters need to be written carefully, after all. Anywho, I am genuinely interested in your story. I've read other fics in which Harry is in this situation but the whole part with his knowing Snape and getting close to Madame Pomfrey is awesome. It's a good thing that he's found at least one other person to cherish aside from Boris. And I AM also quite fond of the medi-witch myself, if only because I've read too much of Healer Pomfrey's (another fanfic writer here) stories ^^;; This is wonderful development. I'm still on the edge about Harry not being known as Lucas in Hogwarts (entailing that Snape doesn't have a clue either). It's just so exciting! I hope you'd continue writing this, even if you'd take (oh, heaven forbid) over a year to post the next chapter--just as long as you'd STILL write it to the very last chapter. Hope you do the world a favor by sharing your great writing skills! Take care! Milky Etoile ^.~ |
| Blackangle2011 2008-10-06 ch 20, | abuseUpdate soon |
| Angelfirenze 2008-10-06 ch 3, | abuseYeah, this still needs revision. Very badly. The emotional content, however, is still absolutely harrowing and I have to wonder how my face looks right now. |
| Angelfirenze 2008-10-06 ch 2, | abuseTo be honest, your betas didn't do a very good job. The prose is choppy and there are still grammatical mistakes, but the emotional impact of what's already written is heartrending. I almost don't want to see what this would be like reading without the lingering errors -- so many stories paint James as an absolute hero when there's no evidence whatsoever from the text that it was the case. James was an **, plain and simple. I cannot readily believe Lily would ever marry him, let alone raise children with him. It's ridiculous. |
| cephygnus 2008-10-05 ch 20, | abuseHello! Just caught up with the story. I hope Harry's life will be taking a turn for the best now. Keep having fun! Chris |
| Snake of Medusa 2008-10-03 ch 20, | abuseWow, this fic keeps on the brink of tears, I love it! When will Snape figure out that Lucas is Harry and that JP's going to the special hell? Please let /someone/ figure it out soon! T_T |
| -soon- 2008-10-03 ch 20, | abuseThis is a really good story you've got going here. I love it :D. I fing it odd that Snape would have a son, but you've made it work here, so congratulations. I'm not sure if your story is original (it's almost impossible to have an original story line these days), but I haven't read any others like it and I am thoroughly enjoying it. My only request is update soon :D (and similarily, please don't abandon it). -soon- (Just to be random, btw my name's Samantha too... well Sam I s'pose :D) |